Her gown was so tight it was hard to move she tried hard not to fall as she walked down the twisted stairway. The party was filled with Victoria ’s wealthy friends, rich doctors and business men toasted their champagne glasses laughing. The rest were called “The Average”, the party had divided them down the middle. The rich stayed in the front of the house and the average had fun in the back. Every hour Catherine went to the front of the house to the back where her cousins were having the better party. She had a reputation to keep, if she wanted to talk to the average she had to be sneaky. Jean felt more comfortable being with the average people but it put more pressure on her to be more perfect, the party wasn't for her so she had to stay classy.
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(Rewrite this for the better and win or give me TIPS to improve)
DONT WORRY I WONT MAKE THIS MY INTRODUCTION, I'LL PUT IT SOMEWHERE ELSE BUT i STILL NEED HELP