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My SHORT writing? Working on active voice and show not tell?
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<blockquote data-quote="Jaidee" data-source="post: 2306425" data-attributes="member: 497116"><p>Hi! Long time no answers, I don't know if you remember me but you answered my first lot of B&A questions and gave me a LOT of help!</p><p></p><p>Anyhoo... I LOVE this! It's full of suspense and I hope I will be able to read it soon. I could really imagine it and since it's the end of a paragraph/chapter I understand why some details (the colour of Boon's hair, for example) aren't mentioned.</p><p></p><p>Please carry on writing this! I love it, it's amazingly wonderful!</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Jaidee, post: 2306425, member: 497116"] Hi! Long time no answers, I don't know if you remember me but you answered my first lot of B&A questions and gave me a LOT of help! Anyhoo... I LOVE this! It's full of suspense and I hope I will be able to read it soon. I could really imagine it and since it's the end of a paragraph/chapter I understand why some details (the colour of Boon's hair, for example) aren't mentioned. Please carry on writing this! I love it, it's amazingly wonderful! [/QUOTE]
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