My singing/screaming?

[[?]Die Romantic[?]]

I know its only a short bit to listen to but opinions please?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hvhg8oZo0lA
well if your just gonna be a total booty shut up!! i want advice not total critiscism!

 

[whatevbookwrm687]

You sound a little bit nasal, but have good projection. try to open your mouth a little to free the vowels in the lyrics. Screaming's decent, I understand you're going gently cause your vocal cords are at stake here. I think it's okay!