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<blockquote data-quote="AnnabethChase" data-source="post: 2331766" data-attributes="member: 778263">I think its great. It reminds me of Twilight, even though the plotline is not copying Twilight in ANY way. If you only want &quot;constructive criticism of praise&quot;, the problem is, you&#039;ll never get better at writing. You can only get better through those &quot;mean feedback&quot;. From what I experienced as a writer,welcome all types of feedback, mean and not mean. If you dont agree with those people who say the mean feedback--and they are not actually mean &quot;people&quot;, because even though what they say are mean, what they said could be valuable into contributing into your novel or novella--just ignore them. Everyone has different opinions. You cant let them not have a different opinion.Hmm...well, one advice,try not to copy other books. Like, I know the plotline is not like them, but the words you say, the basic outline, maybe, it looks a bit like the other novels. If you want to get published or just stand out, you have to write something different, unique, something only you can give to the crowd. And thats hard. With all the books these days, you can hardly not copy anyone else. All the popular ideas are taken, like magic and mythology and other stuff in the Fantasy section. But just stick with what you have, but I think the Shadow Fey reminds me of the Dementors in Harry Potter, except for they feed on souls, and this creates Shadow Feys. But the idea &quot;feed on&quot; is kinda overused.And Sage is a great name for ANYTHING. A person, boy or girl, a name of weapon, and a particular name for a type of creature. Samantha can cover up in the mortal world for &quot;Sage&quot;, if its a girl. If its a boy, Sam. Easy.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="AnnabethChase, post: 2331766, member: 778263"] I think its great. It reminds me of Twilight, even though the plotline is not copying Twilight in ANY way. If you only want "constructive criticism of praise", the problem is, you'll never get better at writing. You can only get better through those "mean feedback". From what I experienced as a writer,welcome all types of feedback, mean and not mean. If you dont agree with those people who say the mean feedback--and they are not actually mean "people", because even though what they say are mean, what they said could be valuable into contributing into your novel or novella--just ignore them. Everyone has different opinions. You cant let them not have a different opinion. Hmm...well, one advice,try not to copy other books. Like, I know the plotline is not like them, but the words you say, the basic outline, maybe, it looks a bit like the other novels. If you want to get published or just stand out, you have to write something different, unique, something only you can give to the crowd. And thats hard. With all the books these days, you can hardly not copy anyone else. All the popular ideas are taken, like magic and mythology and other stuff in the Fantasy section. But just stick with what you have, but I think the Shadow Fey reminds me of the Dementors in Harry Potter, except for they feed on souls, and this creates Shadow Feys. But the idea "feed on" is kinda overused.And Sage is a great name for ANYTHING. A person, boy or girl, a name of weapon, and a particular name for a type of creature. Samantha can cover up in the mortal world for "Sage", if its a girl. If its a boy, Sam. Easy. [/QUOTE]

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