This is a new blurb for my novel I'm writing, I've been trying to come up with a good concise blurb that will catch the attention of folks... let me know what you think... sound good? would you read?
"Subtle Luminosity"
Ex. Department of Homeland Security employee, Jason Upton uses his training to unravel a governmental mystery, that only him and one other person knew. After the death of the only other person who could help him, its left all on Jason's shoulder to pluck out the subtle clues this late ambassador left behind. With his extraordinary intelligence Jason barrels down a path that leads him to a changing of the country as we know it forever.
The wording is terrible, but its just a prototype right now. whattaya think?
"Subtle Luminosity"
Ex. Department of Homeland Security employee, Jason Upton uses his training to unravel a governmental mystery, that only him and one other person knew. After the death of the only other person who could help him, its left all on Jason's shoulder to pluck out the subtle clues this late ambassador left behind. With his extraordinary intelligence Jason barrels down a path that leads him to a changing of the country as we know it forever.
The wording is terrible, but its just a prototype right now. whattaya think?