So I have to write a thesis on the book Night for my high school sophomore english class and I was thinking of relating it to the Genocide in Darfur, Sudan.
For my thesis statement I was planning on writing something like:
Although Elie Wiesel wrote Night to help educate and prevent further genocides like the Holocaust, they are still going on today as seen in Darfur, Sudan.
I really don't like the "..they are still going on today as seen in Darfur, Sudan."
Is there another way I can word this that is less awkward?
For my thesis statement I was planning on writing something like:
Although Elie Wiesel wrote Night to help educate and prevent further genocides like the Holocaust, they are still going on today as seen in Darfur, Sudan.
I really don't like the "..they are still going on today as seen in Darfur, Sudan."
Is there another way I can word this that is less awkward?