Ok. So I was just venting but... What do you think? I am 13 years old.?

[tlll>Cherry<lllt]

There may be a few spelling and stuff like that wrong but besides that. Thanks. All thoughts are welcome. Bad and good.


Thu my whole life I have had a whole lot of problems. Family, Friends, and School. Some that could be fixed and others that couldn't’t. I have cried myself to sleep. I wondered if I would ever have my mom back. I wondered if I was ever going to have friends. I wondered if I was ever going to think I loved someone. Well all of those came true. Life at first I thought sucked. I hated school. I always fought with my family. Never wanted to hang outside of my house. I hated everything. Everyone hated me. Life sucked. You think that its never going to get better. Well that’s not true. Life only gets better. If I was to look back two years ago I would see a drugged out mom and dad. I would see a girl that hated everything. That had break downs at times. Wanted to die sometimes too. Life just didn't’t seem worth it. But then I remembered that if my mom and my dad hadn't’t done all that my life wouldn't’t have been as good as it is now. Because of my mom doing drugs we are a whole lot closer. I can talk to her about anything. She was always willing to talk even Thu her addiction. I would sit alone for hours and only left to eat and go to the bathroom. That’s it. Life was screwed up. Well now all I do is hang out. I have a few good friends and I realized something super important in life. People can label you all they want but you are the one to decide whether that label is true or not. If someone says oh you’re a ****. And you believe them chances are you are going to act like that. People that label you are actually giving there opinion. So take it how you want. But all I am doing with peoples opinion is saying oh glad you have an opinion. Don’t let someone tell you what you are or what you are going to be. If someone says you are going to end up a lonely homeless person. Show them wrong. Let them know that you got to be a doctor or a teacher or what ever you wanted to be. If they tell you something bad say ok and deal with it. My life now is getting better. My mom and dad are not doing drugs. My grandma and aunt are happy. Life is working out better then I ever thought. Now school. I hated school and I still hate school but one thing you have to remember is that no matter what people say you need school. School is how you are going to strive at what ever you want to do. I have had people tell me that I am not going to go to collage or that I am going to be a druggie one day but the best day of my life is going to be the day that I get to say HEY LOSER GUESS WHAT I DID WHAT YOU SAID WAS IMPOSSIBLE FOR ME TO DO! And that will be the best.
No its not a diary. I was just kinda feeling like I needed to vent so I started writing about my life. I dont really know what it is. I am going to write more. I think it will make me feel better.
Well the reason I am asking is because I showed one of my friends and they told me I should write a book about my life and I was actually thinking about it. So I wanted your guys thoughts before I actually sat and did it.

 

[Marah]

Good for you! That's a mature decision to make for only being 13. My only advice would only be, don't stoop to their level.
They can say all the want about you, but at the end of the day, don't become them.

The best revenge isn't when you get back or get even, it's when you get ahead.

Do your best as you progress through life, and never look back at those people.

 

[RandomSkittlesz]

Its great,spell check lol blahh bump itt!!
This is what you should do.
Turn it into a story.
Make the main character basically yourself add details drama love. Lol it might even be an autobiography!!
Writing is one of the best ways to vent!!

xoxo
God bless

 

[Twilightheadded]

is it a story or something? or is it like your personal diary? just curious. I'm going to rate this a 6.5-7/10 (around 6.5/10 to 7/10, if you're confused). um, yeah there's nothing much else to say. is that the whole thing? were you going to write more?

 

[mary]

I've once made a test:I gave a friend of mine a piece of writing to read, of which I knew it was a total nonsense, with mistakes and stuff like that in order to confirm a hunch of mine.
I was told that it was beautiful and that I should write more.(I told the friend I wrote it)
Furthermore,I talked to that friend about a common acquaintance we both knew , who liked writing short poetry.I saw my friend lie to that person in the face about how good that thing was and that she should continue writing.Roght after that, she told me it was a rubbish poem, but she just couldn't insult the writer b saying that.
It's a simple psychological fact:even if you don't care about the person, you will never tell them something they wrote is a complete nonsense.You don't want to upset them and believe me, you'd be at least a little upset about being told your writing is not good.If you want to know a real opinion, go to an online writing group, there are plenty of them.When your friend tells you how good of a writer you are, a tiny sense of reality goes floating in the sky.
You should use an alignment somewhere it is too tiring to read so much without some space.
A book must have 40,000 words.It takes time, it takes ambition, it takes at least 5 months of your life.To write a book, you must exercise every day.You have to be alert and conscious about everything you write and be sure you have a plot.
You must write,write,write.If you think you can do that,good luck.

 

[KathrynW]

Do you just want to vent? If so, you should not be on here asking for critique. Just write, let your feelings out. And then forget about it.