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Okay, can anybody help me improve on this story?? And help with the next bit?
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<blockquote data-quote="glitter" data-source="post: 2728096" data-attributes="member: 137168"><p>" this is heaven!" sighed grace and faith together simultaneously, they laughed as they sunbathed on the hot, beautiful, refreshing sun drenched angelic beach, the sunlight glittering on every grain of sand, the beach idyllic, white and fresh as the aqua blue waves crashed against the cliffs. Grace decided to go off and find some shells, taking her bucket with her. She walked along the shore feeling the tiny grains between her toes as the waves crashed gently against the tide, a spray of sea splashing her tanned skin. She looked back to see her footprints that had embedded in the sand but as if too soon the sweeping waves washed them away and then returned to the deep blue sea. She decided to fill her bucket with the water instead as she walked back along the shell studded sand over to faith, who had dozed off. On the count of three she threw the bucket of water over her.</p><p>"OH MY GOSH!" she shrieked *as she chased grace along the shore, miles behind. After she finally caught her they both collapsed laughing, a pile of arms and legs, none of them knowing which ones belonged to who "what's that??" asked faith, pointing over to a small object, gleaming in the sunlight as the rippling water washed it to shore. They walked over to discover what it was kneeling into the sand.It was a short, squat bottle that brought to mind a portly gentleman accustomed to the best of the most-worldly comforts. It had a tinge of blue - once a deep, brilliant blue, that had faded to a sky colour with the years of being carried from its place of origin through salt and sand. A prominent red seal at the neck of the bottle made it look important..and through the shimmering sand, She saw it, scroll of paper bound together by a thin piece of leather.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>Btw, faith and grace are twins and this is for homework XD thx, answers in return xx</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="glitter, post: 2728096, member: 137168"] " this is heaven!" sighed grace and faith together simultaneously, they laughed as they sunbathed on the hot, beautiful, refreshing sun drenched angelic beach, the sunlight glittering on every grain of sand, the beach idyllic, white and fresh as the aqua blue waves crashed against the cliffs. Grace decided to go off and find some shells, taking her bucket with her. She walked along the shore feeling the tiny grains between her toes as the waves crashed gently against the tide, a spray of sea splashing her tanned skin. She looked back to see her footprints that had embedded in the sand but as if too soon the sweeping waves washed them away and then returned to the deep blue sea. She decided to fill her bucket with the water instead as she walked back along the shell studded sand over to faith, who had dozed off. On the count of three she threw the bucket of water over her. "OH MY GOSH!" she shrieked *as she chased grace along the shore, miles behind. After she finally caught her they both collapsed laughing, a pile of arms and legs, none of them knowing which ones belonged to who "what's that??" asked faith, pointing over to a small object, gleaming in the sunlight as the rippling water washed it to shore. They walked over to discover what it was kneeling into the sand.It was a short, squat bottle that brought to mind a portly gentleman accustomed to the best of the most-worldly comforts. It had a tinge of blue - once a deep, brilliant blue, that had faded to a sky colour with the years of being carried from its place of origin through salt and sand. A prominent red seal at the neck of the bottle made it look important..and through the shimmering sand, She saw it, scroll of paper bound together by a thin piece of leather. Btw, faith and grace are twins and this is for homework XD thx, answers in return xx [/QUOTE]
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