please critique my report?

eleonora

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good morning everyone!

i have to write a reflection piece for my theology class on how i see the world and the humans not measuring up to the picture of the first creation account.heres what i have so far:

god fashioned the human race and gave the earth a face. God crafted our world with harmony and agreement in mind. durning the first little while on this newly created earth, Gods few citizens began to disobey Him; becoming weighed down by greed and thriving power.

please and thank you
 
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