crosscountrygirl1
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Constructive Critisism Please... I'm New At This... I Need Some Help On The Ending I Think..
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Those words you say.
The ones that make me feel as if
I'm the only one in the world.
The ones that make me feel loved, special.
Those words you say that hypnotize
Me into your blue eyes.
I savor them like a child does every
last bite of ice-cream.
Rolling them over and over again in my mind.
Making me feel secure.
An idea jarrs my thoughts like
A freight train breaking through.
Could it be? I wonder...
Those words you say.
The ones that make me feel as if
I'm the only one in the world.
The ones that make me feel loved, special.
Making me feel secure.
Did you say them to her?
No Title Yet...
Those words you say.
The ones that make me feel as if
I'm the only one in the world.
The ones that make me feel loved, special.
Those words you say that hypnotize
Me into your blue eyes.
I savor them like a child does every
last bite of ice-cream.
Rolling them over and over again in my mind.
Making me feel secure.
An idea jarrs my thoughts like
A freight train breaking through.
Could it be? I wonder...
Those words you say.
The ones that make me feel as if
I'm the only one in the world.
The ones that make me feel loved, special.
Making me feel secure.
Did you say them to her?