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<blockquote data-quote="john" data-source="post: 2077991" data-attributes="member: 5463">Wow, this book sounds really good!&nbsp; I will definitely buy it when it comes out, let me assure you.I can tell you that you are definitely on the right track with this story.&nbsp; I&#039;ve always liked reoccurring enemies and if you plan on making more books in this series after this one then I recommend that you keep Demas alive (who actually sounds pretty cool).&nbsp; Also, you could make it make it so that his seemingly &quot;private&quot; group of soldiers is actually working for the Russian government to obtain information about or even capture the leader of these creatures.&nbsp; That could explain the reason why he betrays Joel and the WRI (based on their name, maybe they just want to study and understand these creatures?), and possibly even set the stage for a larger-scale, alternate history conflict between the UN and Russia.&nbsp; Ultimately, though, it&#039;s up to you.Good luck with your story!</blockquote>

[QUOTE="john, post: 2077991, member: 5463"] Wow, this book sounds really good! I will definitely buy it when it comes out, let me assure you. I can tell you that you are definitely on the right track with this story. I've always liked reoccurring enemies and if you plan on making more books in this series after this one then I recommend that you keep Demas alive (who actually sounds pretty cool). Also, you could make it make it so that his seemingly "private" group of soldiers is actually working for the Russian government to obtain information about or even capture the leader of these creatures. That could explain the reason why he betrays Joel and the WRI (based on their name, maybe they just want to study and understand these creatures?), and possibly even set the stage for a larger-scale, alternate history conflict between the UN and Russia. Ultimately, though, it's up to you. Good luck with your story! [/QUOTE]

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