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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Mark" data-source="post: 2116193" data-attributes="member: 209771"><p>We all have a future we just can't be sure of our endings. Poet material ? As far as I can tell you have the ability to use words in a nice way. Although the subject matter  here although noble is a little too peppered with in your face goody two shoes rhetoric and I'm a little shocked it didn't end with "For only two dollars a day you could feed little punjab and his 23 cousins for 1 month" Be that as it may if you just try not to  force a subject and let one flow from your heart  with out thinking about it much  I really do think you could write some very good stuff. Yes, I think you just might be a fine example of poet material . I'm not an expert and I really did think the hall closet  was the restroom the other night................but I can read and I think it's good, really I do.</p></blockquote><p></p>