Jun 21, 2025
Оfftopic Community
Оfftopic Community
Forums
New posts
Search forums
What's new
Featured content
New posts
New media
New media comments
New resources
New profile posts
Latest activity
Media
New media
New comments
Search media
Resources
Latest reviews
Search resources
Members
Current visitors
New profile posts
Search profile posts
Log in
Register
What's new
Search
Search
Search titles only
By:
New posts
Search forums
Menu
Log in
Register
Install the app
Install
Forums
OnTopic Community
Trivia & Polls
Poll: What do you think of that poem?
JavaScript is disabled. For a better experience, please enable JavaScript in your browser before proceeding.
You are using an out of date browser. It may not display this or other websites correctly.
You should upgrade or use an
alternative browser
.
Reply to thread
Message
<blockquote data-quote="Soosoo" data-source="post: 2350450" data-attributes="member: 813069"><p>I wrote that poem and I wish you tell me what you think of it</p><p>excellent</p><p>good</p><p>just ok</p><p>weak</p><p>anything else?</p><p></p><p>ok here's the poem</p><p></p><p>Sorrowfully sits and sorrowfully weeps</p><p>Can't get what her soul needs</p><p>Her heart sorrowfully beats and bleeds</p><p>Could the reason be her bad deeds?</p><p>Will this never cease?</p><p>Oh please!</p><p>God, give her what she needs</p><p>She needs some mind peace</p><p>And peace is only dumb people's dreams</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Soosoo, post: 2350450, member: 813069"] I wrote that poem and I wish you tell me what you think of it excellent good just ok weak anything else? ok here's the poem Sorrowfully sits and sorrowfully weeps Can't get what her soul needs Her heart sorrowfully beats and bleeds Could the reason be her bad deeds? Will this never cease? Oh please! God, give her what she needs She needs some mind peace And peace is only dumb people's dreams [/QUOTE]
Insert quotes…
Name
Verification
Please enable JavaScript to continue.
Loading…
Post reply
Top