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Kodakmoment

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I rise from the barrel under earth
tape worms, grass, and lava melting skins under my shirt
evil eyes peaking at ease with demonds I lurk
blacks selling crack in my eyes so with great please i smirk
the streets vicious
crack fiends acting suspicious
while drug dealers, and chain stealers feeling ambitous
coc steaming threw pots, drug sent smelling delecious
getting high mind over seas swimming with sharks and fishes
Real rap for the thug assassins
that kills kats on tracks for the luv and passion
dimonds chains on the neck and the wrist flashing
but dims out when stolen for the money or fashion
I spit on top of my dome like my brains on cellings
toothless flow getting deep in cavities like dentail fillings
for money, chicks, and drugs it's more of stealing
and for ice, sneaks, and cars it's more of killing
When will the foolish rap kats learn
blessed with a devilish flow cuz on the mic a true mc burns


running out of characters! rate plz
 
is it like kanye west -like sorta??

well go with that type of beat like American Boy

and u should go ok!

bye
 
ohh i like it!!
something that has meaning


unlike yah b**** yahhhh lol! jk :P


answer mine thanx :D
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Please rate my lyrics

To see my flow you hit a switch, to see me kill you hit my bitch, yeh that’s right you hurt my girl, I mean that’s wrong you hurt my girl, now ima destroy your fucking world, yo, no life but the high life, your wife vs my wife, infact I want them both, ignore the oath I had chozen, that’s back when I was faded, now all I am is hated, by all these wack ass rappers, who changed the fucking game I’ll change my name before you recapture fame, I just put out your flame, so now whats your fucking name?
 
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