Rate My Rap im the 3rd verse on youtube......but check deez lyrics n rate them?

BrandonP

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qgNNzG9gB8M

But other than that these are what i have for my new song

Got tha game on lock,put away ya rhymes
ice on my watch,might freeze time
u gon need a new trak wen i rec this beat
they think i got a fever cuz i keep dat heat
u against me,the result is kinda scary
i keep addin up like i was playin solitarie
i tired of these boyz goin tryna be me
deez boys like stevie,lil dudes cnt see me
no im not 11,just turned 12
reachin 4 da heavns. n im finna raise hell
u cant uderstand wat i say yo
say bro,
i got ya head spinnin like tornados
pray bro
playin wit yo head like play-do
say bro.u need to stop frontin so gon head bak up
u need to learn yo math b4 u go n try to add up
fresh from da arctic dats where i got deez rocks
and yall boys jus squares n im think out tha box
dont u dare,u bout to get broke
theze boys jus squarez,bout to get smoked
took tha ice off n i dropped it on da carpet
froze da northside and dats how we got tha arctic
P.S. This rap i jus wrote ^ is on the im illy beat by t.i.
 

TYTHAARTIST

New member
sounds koo for a youngsta, but i've heard better.. stay at it and youll get better with experience. try working on more catchy and clever punchlines and multi-syllable rhyme schemes. good luck fam
 
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