Recreation Poerty changed into a letter?

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Hey guys
I have picked a poem, 'born yesterday' i have written half a page but i need to write more can you please give me some ideas what i can write.. i have chosen to change it into a letter. and can i have good words too please
thankyoou
 

RishiMittal

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Dude! You could have at least given us who it is by!
How were we supposed to know it was written by some Phillip Larkin!
Are we magicians?
Anyway, here's your letter-

My dearest Sally,
At long last, the dreaded day has arrived.
Finally, the time has come when you are drifting away from me and all of your friends.
But on this sad day, I will hold my head high and not falter.
I want you to remember us and most of all, me.
I want you to remember and cherish our moments together, no matter how small they were.
I may not be more than a single drop in your ocean of happiness and life, but you were my Poseidon. You were the one who ruled my seas and filled it with calm waters. But now that you are gone, all that's left are raging storm of despair and loneliness.
So today, I will gather all my courage, and express my true feelings for you,
I will not write the things others have written to you.
I will not write about you blooming from a bud of innocence and shyness that you currently are, into a flower of beauty and confidence, that your are bound to become.
I shall not write about you either about finding success or the love of your life.
For these things have been spoken and mentioned countless times.
I will not write about them but if you do acquire them, do know that there will be no one happier than me to receive the news.
But I will write you this.
Even if you do not bloom in that beautiful flower that you so desired to become and remain a bud, do not fret.
Even if you stay ordinary and normal, and not stand out as the lady everyone desires, do not worry.
Even if you are remain one of us, and not turn into one who has descended from the heavens above, do not panic, instead find comfort in the fact.
Find comfort in the fact that you are ordinary and no one special, if that's the path fate decide to take.
Because if being ordinary is what it takes to achieve true happiness, then so be it.
Because that is what I wish for you.
I wish for you to seek happiness in whatever you do and whoever you become.
Because if you are happy, all those material things you set out to achieve would become pointless.
If your soul is at peace with who you are, then all that beauty and success others wanted for you would have no value.
Because, you know you are happy and have no regrets.
And the is what I wish for you, my dear sweet Sally.
I will be awaiting your letter and your response.
I will wait for an eternity if I have to.
Because I love you.
I bid you farewell, my love.
Have a great life, in which I hope I can play a huge role.
Your's forever,
Phillip
 
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