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<blockquote data-quote="Thahira" data-source="post: 2193055" data-attributes="member: 773040">Okay so, I am a roleplay addict. I have two main roleplays which I am most active in and what I need help on is...SAVE MY CHARACTERS FROM BECOMING A MARY-SUE D:I&#039;m sure on one of the roleplays, my character unfortunately became a Mary-Sue. Both her parents are dead which caused her to have sudden mood swings and she cries a lot (though I try VERY VERY hard to reduce that.) She is good at sword-fighting but gets hurt a lot, stabbed, etc. But all the other characters keeps fussing over her when that happens X__X She plays guitar but I explained how her voice wasn&#039;t oh-so beautiful. She&#039;s died twice, but came back (DAMN IT, WHY DID I LET THAT HAPPEN?!). First time was cuz this other roleplayer killed her but brought her back to life just to show how powerful his character was, and the other time I killed her with my other character just cuz I ran out of a good plotline D: And now she&#039;s blind (IS THAT A SIGN OF A MARY-SUE?!) But anyways, in the plot, the heavens are broken so people come back and go a lot. She has an okay sense of humor and has the habit of punching people that tick her off. Also, her romance life is totally messed up. She became friends with this one guy who turned up so suddenly in her life, and after years of roleplaying (yes, years) those characters started to secretly like/love each other. And when he kissed her the first time to calm her down, she became all confused, shoved him away, and told him she hated him. Big conflict thingy happened dun dun dunnn!But they got back together. Soooo.....Anyways, I know that she&#039;s coming close to a Mary-Sue. I tried real hard to make her a hardcore tomboy with tons and tons of flaws (extreme unattractive clumsiness, like crashing into trees and making a total fool out of herself and NOT making her cute like Stephenie Meyer did to Bella) but I think I accidentally made her my character a little too nice...D: help?(If I&#039;m helped with my first character, I&#039;ll move on to my next one.)</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Thahira, post: 2193055, member: 773040"] Okay so, I am a roleplay addict. I have two main roleplays which I am most active in and what I need help on is...SAVE MY CHARACTERS FROM BECOMING A MARY-SUE D: I'm sure on one of the roleplays, my character unfortunately became a Mary-Sue. Both her parents are dead which caused her to have sudden mood swings and she cries a lot (though I try VERY VERY hard to reduce that.) She is good at sword-fighting but gets hurt a lot, stabbed, etc. But all the other characters keeps fussing over her when that happens X__X She plays guitar but I explained how her voice wasn't oh-so beautiful. She's died twice, but came back (DAMN IT, WHY DID I LET THAT HAPPEN?!). First time was cuz this other roleplayer killed her but brought her back to life just to show how powerful his character was, and the other time I killed her with my other character just cuz I ran out of a good plotline D: And now she's blind (IS THAT A SIGN OF A MARY-SUE?!) But anyways, in the plot, the heavens are broken so people come back and go a lot. She has an okay sense of humor and has the habit of punching people that tick her off. Also, her romance life is totally messed up. She became friends with this one guy who turned up so suddenly in her life, and after years of roleplaying (yes, years) those characters started to secretly like/love each other. And when he kissed her the first time to calm her down, she became all confused, shoved him away, and told him she hated him. Big conflict thingy happened dun dun dunnn! But they got back together. Soooo..... Anyways, I know that she's coming close to a Mary-Sue. I tried real hard to make her a hardcore tomboy with tons and tons of flaws (extreme unattractive clumsiness, like crashing into trees and making a total fool out of herself and NOT making her cute like Stephenie Meyer did to Bella) but I think I accidentally made her my character a little too nice...D: help? (If I'm helped with my first character, I'll move on to my next one.) [/QUOTE]

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