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So this is a small rap i made can ya tell me what should be fixed?
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<blockquote data-quote="Grim" data-source="post: 2594036" data-attributes="member: 304260"><p>Even I can see it needs fixing but I'm not sure n always overly tired on how to think so str8. </p><p></p><p>Im cuttin in deep watching you tuck n sleep,</p><p>Fuckin lack n creep as your blood seeps through the crevices, the sheets are sliced</p><p>Its silent cant even ice it, im violent dont even wanna isolate it, give me a violin n im gunna impale it right to ya skull, you looked innocent at first but im gunna give you a late birthday date, i indicate you are still the same n this is your day for your fate.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Grim, post: 2594036, member: 304260"] Even I can see it needs fixing but I'm not sure n always overly tired on how to think so str8. Im cuttin in deep watching you tuck n sleep, Fuckin lack n creep as your blood seeps through the crevices, the sheets are sliced Its silent cant even ice it, im violent dont even wanna isolate it, give me a violin n im gunna impale it right to ya skull, you looked innocent at first but im gunna give you a late birthday date, i indicate you are still the same n this is your day for your fate. [/QUOTE]
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