ok here is the topic and what i have to do.
Some people think that raising the driving age could reduce accidents and save lives. Should your state raise the driving age by one year? Write an essay in which you both state and support your view on this issue. Remember that you want to convince your audience to agree with you.
ok now here is wat i wrote.
Raising the driving age you think will save more lives. Well, I don’t think that will help. We would all love for more mature adults to drive instead of some immature underage teenagers. I think raising the state driving age would be great for the safety of our citizens. But just because we raise the age does not mean everyone will start driving at that age.
Raising the age will maybe stop a few teens at driving in the streets but that is a very small percentage compared to the average teens that start driving at an early age. They will always have the curiosity in wanting to drive. So if the teens wanted to, they could always just try to convince their parents into letting them.
Kids nowadays have girlfriends or boyfriends and they would love to go to the movies maybe. So what do they do? They don’t want their parents taking them. So they just ask for someone to help them in teaching them on how to drive. Most parents would not neglect in teaching them on how to drive because it would usually work out just fine for them. The parents would maybe want to get some eggs from the store but they don’t want to go. So what would they do if they had a child that could drive? Ask them to go for them.
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right here i need to write another paragraph on why am i right. i am against the topic. i need another reason to write about. so can someone tell me a good reason.
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and right here i need "One paragraph that the opposition thinks and why they are wrong" what is in quotes my teacher put down for me to right about which i don't know what it means or what to write about
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- then this essay end with is-
What the state should do is require parents to be in the car with their young teenager. That way the adult can correct the teen with any mistakes. They could also give any advice to help reduce any kind of damage to our streets and save the lives that might otherwise be taken in accidents.
--i just want some help on the paragraphs that are missing which i put with some line with what should go there. thank you for your help.
Some people think that raising the driving age could reduce accidents and save lives. Should your state raise the driving age by one year? Write an essay in which you both state and support your view on this issue. Remember that you want to convince your audience to agree with you.
ok now here is wat i wrote.
Raising the driving age you think will save more lives. Well, I don’t think that will help. We would all love for more mature adults to drive instead of some immature underage teenagers. I think raising the state driving age would be great for the safety of our citizens. But just because we raise the age does not mean everyone will start driving at that age.
Raising the age will maybe stop a few teens at driving in the streets but that is a very small percentage compared to the average teens that start driving at an early age. They will always have the curiosity in wanting to drive. So if the teens wanted to, they could always just try to convince their parents into letting them.
Kids nowadays have girlfriends or boyfriends and they would love to go to the movies maybe. So what do they do? They don’t want their parents taking them. So they just ask for someone to help them in teaching them on how to drive. Most parents would not neglect in teaching them on how to drive because it would usually work out just fine for them. The parents would maybe want to get some eggs from the store but they don’t want to go. So what would they do if they had a child that could drive? Ask them to go for them.
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right here i need to write another paragraph on why am i right. i am against the topic. i need another reason to write about. so can someone tell me a good reason.
______________________________________...
and right here i need "One paragraph that the opposition thinks and why they are wrong" what is in quotes my teacher put down for me to right about which i don't know what it means or what to write about
______________________________________...
- then this essay end with is-
What the state should do is require parents to be in the car with their young teenager. That way the adult can correct the teen with any mistakes. They could also give any advice to help reduce any kind of damage to our streets and save the lives that might otherwise be taken in accidents.
--i just want some help on the paragraphs that are missing which i put with some line with what should go there. thank you for your help.