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<blockquote data-quote="Emura" data-source="post: 2595585" data-attributes="member: 882187">Ok so my trainer likes the ad I&#039;m making for his filly so far. Here is the descritption I put about personality and training. Does it sound good to you? Any glaring grammar errors (I suck at grammar) that need fixed? I can&#039;t really make it much longer if I want to keep it on a page for a flyer.Dorotea is very willing and shows very promising movement for either the Fino or Performance division. This sweet, personable bay filly is halter broke, will lead like a pro, will lift all four feet with just a touch, and will stand for farrier. Up to date on all shots and worming.Besides these I have her mother, father, and both sets of grandparents listed (targeted buyers will know the grandsires and the sire at least, possibly the grand dams also, plus her mothers sire has highly sought after bloodlines). I also have DOB (she is less than 1 year old, born early in March but growing and progressing right on track). No point to put why she is being sold (being sold as part of their breeding line). I also have a conformation pic and contact info.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Emura, post: 2595585, member: 882187"] Ok so my trainer likes the ad I'm making for his filly so far. Here is the descritption I put about personality and training. Does it sound good to you? Any glaring grammar errors (I suck at grammar) that need fixed? I can't really make it much longer if I want to keep it on a page for a flyer. Dorotea is very willing and shows very promising movement for either the Fino or Performance division. This sweet, personable bay filly is halter broke, will lead like a pro, will lift all four feet with just a touch, and will stand for farrier. Up to date on all shots and worming. Besides these I have her mother, father, and both sets of grandparents listed (targeted buyers will know the grandsires and the sire at least, possibly the grand dams also, plus her mothers sire has highly sought after bloodlines). I also have DOB (she is less than 1 year old, born early in March but growing and progressing right on track). No point to put why she is being sold (being sold as part of their breeding line). I also have a conformation pic and contact info. [/QUOTE]

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