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<blockquote data-quote="Gooyie" data-source="post: 2375989" data-attributes="member: 819110">...story starts.? Synopsis:&nbsp; Koro a 10-year old mischevous demon kidnapps Marco Polo, a traveling adventurer, so he can write his story on how he kill&#039;s the evil king and takes the crown!&nbsp; Koro is the main character, he is a demon boy who is naive, innocent yet very cocky.&nbsp; Koro is often pitted into outrageous situations where he is forced to lower his ego and play the hero.&nbsp; With the slamming down of his sizeshifting magical hammer and his fire spitting abillities on his side, no one can stand in his way.&nbsp; How the story basically starts is with Marco Polo, a traveling adventurer who is thirsty as hell, he is traveling on his magical floating yellow-furred ram/sheep in a very hot vast desert, that he has been wandering in for days, when he is suddenly confronted by a hungry giant dessert panda!&nbsp; Polo is terrified and falls to the ground when suddenly a uprising explosion of sand bursts out underneath Polo&#039;s feet.&nbsp; Polo feel&#039;s though he is being lifted and realizes he is in the air as he slides off the surface of the sizeshifing hammer and grips on the edges of it for his dear life. Koro, the mischevious demon, is happy that he&#039;s finally found some food that will make him bigger and stronger for when he fights the king and slams down his enourmous hammer with an unstoppable force, and knocks out the giant dessert panda.&nbsp; Polo falls off the hammer with a sick face, and wakes up, not able to believe his eyes, he sees a gigantic sized hammer slammed down on the giant dessert panda&#039;s head.&nbsp; The hammer shrinks, and the giant panda is still standing, the dessert sand blows when suddenly the giant panda falls directly above Marco.&nbsp; Marco screams and crawls away as far as he can dropping his adventure journal.&nbsp; He escapes from death with an inch and feints, unknowing that his lifes work is burried under a 5 ton panda.&nbsp; Koro is hammer is shrunk and he see&#039;s the floating cloud-like yellow fur ram/sheep drifting away above the giant dessert panda and is intriguied, he&#039;s never tried cloud sheep.&nbsp; Koro jumps on the cloud sheep attempting to bite it and falls right through it with his face slamming down into the dessert sand.&nbsp; The sheep floats towards Marco and Baa&#039;s waking up Marco.&nbsp; Koro gets up aggresivaly and strikes again.&nbsp; The sheep looks back and sees Koro, Koro goes throught the sheep but this time the sheep dissapears and Koro slams right into Marco Polo&#039;s cranium.&nbsp; Koro yells at him saying &quot; What was that for!&quot;, Marco points his finger at him as he says &quot; Your the one that crashed into me!&quot;.&nbsp; Koro, angry, bites Marco&#039;s finger and doesnt let go. Then suddenly the giant dessert panda begins to wake up and gets up, both marco and koro look up ant the gigantic panda.&nbsp; The panda is very angry.&nbsp; Koro says &quot; Eh!&nbsp; I knew you werent dead yet!&quot;.&nbsp; The panda strikes at koro with sound-breaking speed and koro blocks it with one hand as if it were nothing and he enlarges his stomach and spits out several giant fireballs at the panda accidentally burning it to a crisp, the panda falls.&nbsp; Koro says &quot;Oh no!&nbsp; I burned him to a crisp, my lunch is ruined!&quot;.&nbsp; Marco is amazed and terrified at the same time.&nbsp; Koro is very angry and turns around and walks towards marco.&nbsp;&nbsp; Marco says &quot;Please dont hurt me!&quot;&nbsp; and koro says &quot;Hurt you!&nbsp; Im gonna eat you!&quot;.&nbsp; Koro chases Marco in circles when the cloud sheep reappears infront of koro causing him to fall flat on his face.&nbsp; Koro gets up and says &quot; Freekin sheep!&quot;.&nbsp; He steps on something, a red journal and picks it up.&nbsp; Koro opens it and says &quot;Writing?&quot;.&nbsp; Marco is so tired and thirsty that he falls to his knee&#039;s, he is giving up and he goes through his coat to see his journal and finds it is missing.&nbsp; He looks back and sees koro holding it, the thought of his journal being in danger triggered him to run and attempts to snatch it out of Koro&#039;s hands but fails.&nbsp; Marco says &quot;&nbsp; Give me my notebook!&quot;. Koro says &quot; This?&quot;.&nbsp; Marco says &quot; Yes, now give it to me!&quot;.&nbsp; Koro says &quot; So you know how to write!&quot;.&nbsp; Marco says &quot; Yes, Of course!&quot; and snatches it finally.&nbsp; Koro says &quot; Finally, now i can go down in history!&quot;....Sorry guys it&#039;s 2:00 am and im tired as ass, im going to cut it here thanks for reading if you got this far and sorry.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Gooyie, post: 2375989, member: 819110"] ...story starts.? Synopsis: Koro a 10-year old mischevous demon kidnapps Marco Polo, a traveling adventurer, so he can write his story on how he kill's the evil king and takes the crown! Koro is the main character, he is a demon boy who is naive, innocent yet very cocky. Koro is often pitted into outrageous situations where he is forced to lower his ego and play the hero. With the slamming down of his sizeshifting magical hammer and his fire spitting abillities on his side, no one can stand in his way. How the story basically starts is with Marco Polo, a traveling adventurer who is thirsty as hell, he is traveling on his magical floating yellow-furred ram/sheep in a very hot vast desert, that he has been wandering in for days, when he is suddenly confronted by a hungry giant dessert panda! Polo is terrified and falls to the ground when suddenly a uprising explosion of sand bursts out underneath Polo's feet. Polo feel's though he is being lifted and realizes he is in the air as he slides off the surface of the sizeshifing hammer and grips on the edges of it for his dear life. Koro, the mischevious demon, is happy that he's finally found some food that will make him bigger and stronger for when he fights the king and slams down his enourmous hammer with an unstoppable force, and knocks out the giant dessert panda. Polo falls off the hammer with a sick face, and wakes up, not able to believe his eyes, he sees a gigantic sized hammer slammed down on the giant dessert panda's head. The hammer shrinks, and the giant panda is still standing, the dessert sand blows when suddenly the giant panda falls directly above Marco. Marco screams and crawls away as far as he can dropping his adventure journal. He escapes from death with an inch and feints, unknowing that his lifes work is burried under a 5 ton panda. Koro is hammer is shrunk and he see's the floating cloud-like yellow fur ram/sheep drifting away above the giant dessert panda and is intriguied, he's never tried cloud sheep. Koro jumps on the cloud sheep attempting to bite it and falls right through it with his face slamming down into the dessert sand. The sheep floats towards Marco and Baa's waking up Marco. Koro gets up aggresivaly and strikes again. The sheep looks back and sees Koro, Koro goes throught the sheep but this time the sheep dissapears and Koro slams right into Marco Polo's cranium. Koro yells at him saying " What was that for!", Marco points his finger at him as he says " Your the one that crashed into me!". Koro, angry, bites Marco's finger and doesnt let go. Then suddenly the giant dessert panda begins to wake up and gets up, both marco and koro look up ant the gigantic panda. The panda is very angry. Koro says " Eh! I knew you werent dead yet!". The panda strikes at koro with sound-breaking speed and koro blocks it with one hand as if it were nothing and he enlarges his stomach and spits out several giant fireballs at the panda accidentally burning it to a crisp, the panda falls. Koro says "Oh no! I burned him to a crisp, my lunch is ruined!". Marco is amazed and terrified at the same time. Koro is very angry and turns around and walks towards marco. Marco says "Please dont hurt me!" and koro says "Hurt you! Im gonna eat you!". Koro chases Marco in circles when the cloud sheep reappears infront of koro causing him to fall flat on his face. Koro gets up and says " Freekin sheep!". He steps on something, a red journal and picks it up. Koro opens it and says "Writing?". Marco is so tired and thirsty that he falls to his knee's, he is giving up and he goes through his coat to see his journal and finds it is missing. He looks back and sees koro holding it, the thought of his journal being in danger triggered him to run and attempts to snatch it out of Koro's hands but fails. Marco says " Give me my notebook!". Koro says " This?". Marco says " Yes, now give it to me!". Koro says " So you know how to write!". Marco says " Yes, Of course!" and snatches it finally. Koro says " Finally, now i can go down in history!"....Sorry guys it's 2:00 am and im tired as ass, im going to cut it here thanks for reading if you got this far and sorry. [/QUOTE]

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