What can I add to this introduction?

mxkmtt

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Or..maybe you could edit it some, and make the sentences sound less..awkward. Thanks :)
When a government is weak, the country is weak. The citizens of Egypt, Tunisia, and Libya suffered under the harsh rule of their presidents; until they finally took a stand to form the type of government they wanted; the type of country they wanted. Mass protests in Middle Eastern countries produced two rebellious revolutions and an on-going civil war that resulted in thousands of deaths of innocent lives.

P.S: This is about the Arab Spring.
 
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