kao_kid_x10
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I've been writing a book for a while and a wonderful idea for a part in my book popped into my head. here it is tell me what information you get out of it.
Just then Galen was blown over with wind. “Are you serious? The wind thing again!?” He shouted.
“Sorry, but I can’t let you through.” Said a voice.
“Who are you? Show yourself!” Galen shouted.
“I can’t let you get to my son.” Said Keon as he emerged from the shadows.
“D-Dad?” Zethus said confused. “What are you doing? Why are you helping Amphion?”
“I’m sorry Zethus I love you and your brother both. But I believe the only way for this to end, is to end you.”
“You’re sick!” Kathy shouted “C’mon Galen, Liz, Zethus Lets get him.”
“I never liked you much Daddy. I always felt weird around you, always. I wanna see how much my zombies can do for me. Let’s get him.” Liz said summoning ten zombies to her command.
“Leave Zethus he’s in shock it’s just you, me, and Kathy, Liz.” Galen said before unleashing the elemental golems on Keon.
“Right, c’mon Liz.” Kathy said making to pistols appear in her hand.
“I’m afraid I cannot let you even close to me.” Keon said sending them through time.
“Dang it! Where is he and when are we?!” Galen shouted in rage.
“If I’m correct we are in Nagasaki right before the A-bomb hits.” Liz said.
“What?” Kathy asked
“Everyone get down!” Zethus shouted recovering from his stupor. Every one dropped to their stomachs except Galen. “Galen what are you doing?!”
Then Galen hit the ground creating a huge crater. At that moment four elements appeared around them in a dome shape, all elements in their own area. But a fifth area appeared as well. Immediately after the dome appeared, the ground shook violently followed by a loud noise and then strong blast. The fifth area grew until it overwhelmed the other elements.
“Are we gunna die?” Kathy shouted over the noise, tears falling.
“No.” Zethus shouted. “See the dome? That glowing element is Aether. Aether is the ultimate element; it destroys anything and can’t be destroyed. Galen’s book is right there on the ground open, it must have dropped when he made the dome. He has a really good reason right now, which is why Aether appeared.”
The bomb exploded but Galen left the dome up to avoid radiation. “I really hate your father right now. Can you take us home or back there or something so I don’t have to keep this dome up?” he asked.
Kathy tackled Galen giving him a hug “You saved us!” She said gazing into his eyes.
“Ahh! Not right now! If I lose focus, the shield will go down and we’ll get radiation poisoning. I really don’t wanna die.” Galen said.
“Sorry.” Kathy said blushing.
“Seriously Zethus get us out of here!” Galen said again.
“Yes sir! Anything for me lord and his girlfriend.” Zethus said mockingly, making Galen and Kathy blush.
Just then Galen was blown over with wind. “Are you serious? The wind thing again!?” He shouted.
“Sorry, but I can’t let you through.” Said a voice.
“Who are you? Show yourself!” Galen shouted.
“I can’t let you get to my son.” Said Keon as he emerged from the shadows.
“D-Dad?” Zethus said confused. “What are you doing? Why are you helping Amphion?”
“I’m sorry Zethus I love you and your brother both. But I believe the only way for this to end, is to end you.”
“You’re sick!” Kathy shouted “C’mon Galen, Liz, Zethus Lets get him.”
“I never liked you much Daddy. I always felt weird around you, always. I wanna see how much my zombies can do for me. Let’s get him.” Liz said summoning ten zombies to her command.
“Leave Zethus he’s in shock it’s just you, me, and Kathy, Liz.” Galen said before unleashing the elemental golems on Keon.
“Right, c’mon Liz.” Kathy said making to pistols appear in her hand.
“I’m afraid I cannot let you even close to me.” Keon said sending them through time.
“Dang it! Where is he and when are we?!” Galen shouted in rage.
“If I’m correct we are in Nagasaki right before the A-bomb hits.” Liz said.
“What?” Kathy asked
“Everyone get down!” Zethus shouted recovering from his stupor. Every one dropped to their stomachs except Galen. “Galen what are you doing?!”
Then Galen hit the ground creating a huge crater. At that moment four elements appeared around them in a dome shape, all elements in their own area. But a fifth area appeared as well. Immediately after the dome appeared, the ground shook violently followed by a loud noise and then strong blast. The fifth area grew until it overwhelmed the other elements.
“Are we gunna die?” Kathy shouted over the noise, tears falling.
“No.” Zethus shouted. “See the dome? That glowing element is Aether. Aether is the ultimate element; it destroys anything and can’t be destroyed. Galen’s book is right there on the ground open, it must have dropped when he made the dome. He has a really good reason right now, which is why Aether appeared.”
The bomb exploded but Galen left the dome up to avoid radiation. “I really hate your father right now. Can you take us home or back there or something so I don’t have to keep this dome up?” he asked.
Kathy tackled Galen giving him a hug “You saved us!” She said gazing into his eyes.
“Ahh! Not right now! If I lose focus, the shield will go down and we’ll get radiation poisoning. I really don’t wanna die.” Galen said.
“Sorry.” Kathy said blushing.
“Seriously Zethus get us out of here!” Galen said again.
“Yes sir! Anything for me lord and his girlfriend.” Zethus said mockingly, making Galen and Kathy blush.