What could I have my character say in replacement for this?

Pixie

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Basically, two characters in my story are fighting. Character 1 is blaming character 2 for the lack of success in their job and stuff, when they're supposed to be a team. So it's like;

Character 1: I'll tell him {their boss} you're lying.

Character 2: *Heh. Well ain't you the team player.

The line I have for character 2 at the moment isn't really what I want. I kind of want a sharp, sarcastic comeback to her threat that implies she's being selfish, and not a team player at all.

Anyone got anything better than what I've already got? Thanks in advance.
 
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