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Okay, it is a rough draft. Very bad grammar, spelling and vocabulary. I don't edit but i am going to have to learn pretty fast.. 
Okay well, it is about a girl. She is 13 years old, she has dark auburn hair and a spunky personality. her name is Annabelle Marie Marshall, she loves to be the sarcastic one, always prancing around like she owns the place. She has a bad temper, get in the way of it and your her next victim.
That's all i will give out Here is a few paragraphs or sentences.
Chapter One: I Saw Scarlett May.
I watched the door in horror as it slowly opened, the creaking noise of the hinges straining as it was pushed against.
I felt my breath-hitch in my throat as a hound dog appeared in my doorway, the dogs dark, black and cold eyes shining in the moonlit room, it curled its lips, showing it's dagger like teeth.
I tried to get off the bed but it lunged.
I snapped my eyes open, jolting upwards as I squeaked, horrified. I scanned the room hopelessly, the dream still in my head, making it throb. I was trying to shake it away, but to no prevail. I huffed and jumped off my bed, the springs creaking as the weight was lifted from them.
The dream disoriented me and I fell over, my knee was throbbing just as bad now, my toes felt numb as I got up a little wobbly.
I turned around and then gasped, the light shining faintly on a girl. She was sitting on the stool, a small smile on her face. Her brown hair was down and wavy, from what I could see her eyes were a violet colour.
“Hi Annabelle, I am here for just a quick visit. My name is Scarlett May.”
(This isn't all of it, just the start and how she meets her. Remember this is a rough draft and it hasn't got proper grammar, vocab and spelling.)
xxx
Okay well, it is about a girl. She is 13 years old, she has dark auburn hair and a spunky personality. her name is Annabelle Marie Marshall, she loves to be the sarcastic one, always prancing around like she owns the place. She has a bad temper, get in the way of it and your her next victim. That's all i will give out
Here is a few paragraphs or sentences.Chapter One: I Saw Scarlett May.
I watched the door in horror as it slowly opened, the creaking noise of the hinges straining as it was pushed against.
I felt my breath-hitch in my throat as a hound dog appeared in my doorway, the dogs dark, black and cold eyes shining in the moonlit room, it curled its lips, showing it's dagger like teeth.
I tried to get off the bed but it lunged.
I snapped my eyes open, jolting upwards as I squeaked, horrified. I scanned the room hopelessly, the dream still in my head, making it throb. I was trying to shake it away, but to no prevail. I huffed and jumped off my bed, the springs creaking as the weight was lifted from them.
The dream disoriented me and I fell over, my knee was throbbing just as bad now, my toes felt numb as I got up a little wobbly.
I turned around and then gasped, the light shining faintly on a girl. She was sitting on the stool, a small smile on her face. Her brown hair was down and wavy, from what I could see her eyes were a violet colour.
“Hi Annabelle, I am here for just a quick visit. My name is Scarlett May.”
(This isn't all of it, just the start and how she meets her. Remember this is a rough draft and it hasn't got proper grammar, vocab and spelling.)
xxx