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What Do You Think About The Song I Wrote?
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<blockquote data-quote="Alexh" data-source="post: 1614290" data-attributes="member: 212026"><p>I tryed to use more complicated words</p><p>sorry if it sounds a little sexual i didn't think it would come out that way<img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f61b.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":P" title="Stick out tongue :P" data-smilie="7"data-shortname=":P" /></p><p>but tell me what you think</p><p></p><p>U And I Tonight</p><p></p><p>verse 1:</p><p>It wasn’t raining yet</p><p>but it was a little misty</p><p>getting misty on that warm December night</p><p>and my hart was pounding</p><p>I here your voice resounding</p><p>and I knew I had to turn away</p><p>but I just had to see your face</p><p></p><p>hook 1:</p><p>I feel I lie</p><p>as you casually moved in the room</p><p>and I was twisted in the web of my desire</p><p>my apprehensions blew away I only wanted you</p><p>to taste me pain just as you kissed me in the dark</p><p></p><p>course:</p><p>every time I feel the need</p><p>I'd envision you caressing me</p><p>let go back in time</p><p>to the rumors spreading of you and I</p><p>on the roof top valley tonight</p><p></p><p>verse 2:</p><p>these foolish games have got me jaded</p><p>started feeling liberated</p><p>and surrendered as you put me in your arms</p><p>I was so cot up in the moment</p><p>just couldn’t bare to let you go again</p><p>so I thought after this evening</p><p>you would begin to start listing</p><p>listen to my lonely hart</p><p></p><p>hook 2:</p><p>and then you pressed your lips to mine</p><p>I feeling my selfish thoughts I had for a long long time</p><p>and for a wile I felt your love caving in on me</p><p>just couldn't believe that you where standing here with me</p><p></p><p>course:</p><p>every time I feel the need</p><p>I'd envision you caressing me</p><p>let go back in time</p><p>to the rumors spreading of you and I</p><p>on the roof top valley tonight</p><p></p><p>course:</p><p>every time I feel the need</p><p>I'd envision you caressing me</p><p>let go back in time</p><p>to the rumors spreading of you and i</p><p>on the roof top valley tonight</p><p></p><p>bridge:</p><p>what ever you want all surrender</p><p>just as long as you stay forever</p><p>one touch one dream</p><p>so very suddenly as you where kissing me</p><p></p><p>course:</p><p>every time I feel the need</p><p>I'd envision you caressing me</p><p>let go back in time</p><p>to the rumors spreading of you and i</p><p>on the roof top valley tonight</p><p></p><p>course:</p><p>every time I feel the need</p><p>I'd envision you caressing me</p><p>let go back in time</p><p>to the rumors spreading of you and i</p><p>on the roof top valley tonight</p><p>lol sorry i posted it in the wrong secshon but you can still have your point of view on it<img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f61b.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":P" title="Stick out tongue :P" data-smilie="7"data-shortname=":P" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Alexh, post: 1614290, member: 212026"] I tryed to use more complicated words sorry if it sounds a little sexual i didn't think it would come out that way:P but tell me what you think U And I Tonight verse 1: It wasn’t raining yet but it was a little misty getting misty on that warm December night and my hart was pounding I here your voice resounding and I knew I had to turn away but I just had to see your face hook 1: I feel I lie as you casually moved in the room and I was twisted in the web of my desire my apprehensions blew away I only wanted you to taste me pain just as you kissed me in the dark course: every time I feel the need I'd envision you caressing me let go back in time to the rumors spreading of you and I on the roof top valley tonight verse 2: these foolish games have got me jaded started feeling liberated and surrendered as you put me in your arms I was so cot up in the moment just couldn’t bare to let you go again so I thought after this evening you would begin to start listing listen to my lonely hart hook 2: and then you pressed your lips to mine I feeling my selfish thoughts I had for a long long time and for a wile I felt your love caving in on me just couldn't believe that you where standing here with me course: every time I feel the need I'd envision you caressing me let go back in time to the rumors spreading of you and I on the roof top valley tonight course: every time I feel the need I'd envision you caressing me let go back in time to the rumors spreading of you and i on the roof top valley tonight bridge: what ever you want all surrender just as long as you stay forever one touch one dream so very suddenly as you where kissing me course: every time I feel the need I'd envision you caressing me let go back in time to the rumors spreading of you and i on the roof top valley tonight course: every time I feel the need I'd envision you caressing me let go back in time to the rumors spreading of you and i on the roof top valley tonight lol sorry i posted it in the wrong secshon but you can still have your point of view on it:P [/QUOTE]
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