I wrote this essay to try and win tickets to PlayList Live. Please give me advice on improving it and getting more of a chance to win the tickets. Thanks in advance.
I go on a YouTube rampage for the 3rd time today. 'I just gotta meet them forreal' I think. I just wish I could go to Orlando for PlayList Live. The reasons I would like to go is that (1) I would love to be able to meet my idols Tyler Oakley and Nickasaur and (2) I'm tired of watching the people I admire from behind a screen.
Obviously, I would love to meet all the Youtuber's at PlayList Live but especially Tyler Oakley and Nickasaur because I've basically watched them since they've started on YouTube and if I could finally meet them I would achieve one of my huge goals for this year which be amazing since it's only February/March.
Another reason I'd kill to go to PlayList Live is I feel like I've always watched who I loved from behind a screen and I'm tired of it! I just want this once for me to have a real encounter with my idols. That way next time I watch one of Tyler's videos I'll think 'Oh I'm so lucky I got to meet him in REAL LIFE!
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Those are the two main reasons I'd really like to go to PlayList Live. The tickets you have are basically the only chance I have because I'm not old enough to hold a job yet ( Just turned 15). I really hope you consider me for these tickets because I've really wanted to go to a YouTube meetup since I've started on YouTube.
I go on a YouTube rampage for the 3rd time today. 'I just gotta meet them forreal' I think. I just wish I could go to Orlando for PlayList Live. The reasons I would like to go is that (1) I would love to be able to meet my idols Tyler Oakley and Nickasaur and (2) I'm tired of watching the people I admire from behind a screen.
Obviously, I would love to meet all the Youtuber's at PlayList Live but especially Tyler Oakley and Nickasaur because I've basically watched them since they've started on YouTube and if I could finally meet them I would achieve one of my huge goals for this year which be amazing since it's only February/March.
Another reason I'd kill to go to PlayList Live is I feel like I've always watched who I loved from behind a screen and I'm tired of it! I just want this once for me to have a real encounter with my idols. That way next time I watch one of Tyler's videos I'll think 'Oh I'm so lucky I got to meet him in REAL LIFE!
'. Those are the two main reasons I'd really like to go to PlayList Live. The tickets you have are basically the only chance I have because I'm not old enough to hold a job yet ( Just turned 15). I really hope you consider me for these tickets because I've really wanted to go to a YouTube meetup since I've started on YouTube.