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<blockquote data-quote="Kleigh" data-source="post: 2229543" data-attributes="member: 293904"><p>Ryan Austin's Deliquently Dire Dream Diary. </p><p></p><p>Sunday 4th July 2010. </p><p>There he was: my knight in shining armour. </p><p>Well, he wasn't in shining armour. But then again, I don't really like shining armour: it gets in the way; it's too metal. Metal is just annoying; no-one likes metal. Metal is tacky. Why am I going on about metal- I like metal! Well, sort of... it's okay. Is shining armour even made out of metal?! I hope not, because like I've mentioned: I'm not a huge fan. </p><p>Anyway, enough about metal! There Calvin was, in his new school uniform. Calvin is my ex boyfriend, if you were wondering. Oh, and just to let you know, I'm not a little gay boy: I'm a girl. You'd be able to tell if you seen me in the flesh(Well, atleast I hope) but people who I don't know tend to assume I'm a boy. You see, my Mom seemed to think Ryan was a great name for a girl! I beg to differ. </p><p>He looked at me; I looked at him. There was still so much chemistry between us! His hair looked all thick and dark and dreamy, as usual. I just wanted to kiss him... As I stood there drooling, Mia ran up to him and gave him a hug. Mia's my best friend; she also went out with Calvin. Damn, he gets around. But that was a year ago; Calvin and I have only recently broke up. After she was done hugging him, I ran up to him like I did when we were first going out. I wrapped my arms round him tight, and he did the same. He was such a good hugger, just like I'd remembered. I didn't want to let go... I felt the corners of my mouth go up as I held on tight. It was spectacular. </p><p>And then I woke up. </p><p>Damn, why does life have to be so unfair? I didn't even like Calvin anymore, until this stupid dream! I guess he was just on my brain last night. But now I can't stop thinking about him! He keeps signing in and out of msn, and his picture is so cute! Too bad I'll never see him again. They say dreams can come true- well not this one: it's just not meant to be. I'd love to just call him up, arrange a date and show him what he's missing. But... what is he missing? Nothing would be the answer- just some sad little emo loser. Dreams are so sad. I wish I never had them. Well... no, I do want them. But not dreams about Calvin. I don't even want to know him, which is good because he probably doesn't want to know me either. I just wish... I wish we could be friends, like before. Before everything- before we went out, before he very rudely dumped me after our first date. Before, when I could just talk to him about anything and he'd do that cute laugh and tell me I'm funny. </p><p>Those were the days. The days before I had horrendous nightmares of him hugging me. The days when I didn't have to hide my feelings, because I'm proud to say I had none. Nowadays, I'm just an emotional wreck. All because of him, my so-called 'dream boy'. Why did I have to fall for him? Why did he have to have such groovy hair, such magnificent taste in music and such blue eyes? Why did Miss Alexander stupidly sit me next to him in Art? Did she want me to fall in love with him? She could obviously see he was irresistable- anyone could. Well, no, not really. It was just me. I was the only one stupid enough to fall into his trap. Well not anymore... </p><p></p><p>It's my story. I'm a 13 year old girl, so if it's not amazing that's why. What do you think? It's about a girl who keeps a dream diary, if you didn't already guess. What do you think? Thanks in advance<img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Kleigh, post: 2229543, member: 293904"] Ryan Austin's Deliquently Dire Dream Diary. Sunday 4th July 2010. There he was: my knight in shining armour. Well, he wasn't in shining armour. But then again, I don't really like shining armour: it gets in the way; it's too metal. Metal is just annoying; no-one likes metal. Metal is tacky. Why am I going on about metal- I like metal! Well, sort of... it's okay. Is shining armour even made out of metal?! I hope not, because like I've mentioned: I'm not a huge fan. Anyway, enough about metal! There Calvin was, in his new school uniform. Calvin is my ex boyfriend, if you were wondering. Oh, and just to let you know, I'm not a little gay boy: I'm a girl. You'd be able to tell if you seen me in the flesh(Well, atleast I hope) but people who I don't know tend to assume I'm a boy. You see, my Mom seemed to think Ryan was a great name for a girl! I beg to differ. He looked at me; I looked at him. There was still so much chemistry between us! His hair looked all thick and dark and dreamy, as usual. I just wanted to kiss him... As I stood there drooling, Mia ran up to him and gave him a hug. Mia's my best friend; she also went out with Calvin. Damn, he gets around. But that was a year ago; Calvin and I have only recently broke up. After she was done hugging him, I ran up to him like I did when we were first going out. I wrapped my arms round him tight, and he did the same. He was such a good hugger, just like I'd remembered. I didn't want to let go... I felt the corners of my mouth go up as I held on tight. It was spectacular. And then I woke up. Damn, why does life have to be so unfair? I didn't even like Calvin anymore, until this stupid dream! I guess he was just on my brain last night. But now I can't stop thinking about him! He keeps signing in and out of msn, and his picture is so cute! Too bad I'll never see him again. They say dreams can come true- well not this one: it's just not meant to be. I'd love to just call him up, arrange a date and show him what he's missing. But... what is he missing? Nothing would be the answer- just some sad little emo loser. Dreams are so sad. I wish I never had them. Well... no, I do want them. But not dreams about Calvin. I don't even want to know him, which is good because he probably doesn't want to know me either. I just wish... I wish we could be friends, like before. Before everything- before we went out, before he very rudely dumped me after our first date. Before, when I could just talk to him about anything and he'd do that cute laugh and tell me I'm funny. Those were the days. The days before I had horrendous nightmares of him hugging me. The days when I didn't have to hide my feelings, because I'm proud to say I had none. Nowadays, I'm just an emotional wreck. All because of him, my so-called 'dream boy'. Why did I have to fall for him? Why did he have to have such groovy hair, such magnificent taste in music and such blue eyes? Why did Miss Alexander stupidly sit me next to him in Art? Did she want me to fall in love with him? She could obviously see he was irresistable- anyone could. Well, no, not really. It was just me. I was the only one stupid enough to fall into his trap. Well not anymore... It's my story. I'm a 13 year old girl, so if it's not amazing that's why. What do you think? It's about a girl who keeps a dream diary, if you didn't already guess. What do you think? Thanks in advance:) [/QUOTE]
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