What do you think of my poem?

[Toshiro]

I shed my blood for you
You gave me this sorrow to carry
And I don’t think I’ll make it through
Soon you’ll be the to carry this weight

Of all the souls you infatuated
You spit at them like roaches beneath your feet
Yet blood in my veins has not coagulated
This is my Defeat

I trusted in your will
I rusted in your filth
I wanted to feel like something more
More then my soul being gutted and massacred
Left for the black deity to devour, forever more
But Nevermore, will I care for you

Nevermore will my soul bleed for you
For I have moved on
For I have died constantly for your voice
For I have massacred thousands for your touch
For I have bled myself dry for your love

For this is the end
You had your chance to save me
For time will not bend for insects such as myself
Finally, the day when my breath comes to an end
Will be because of you
But please, do not forsake me after I am gone
For I want you to feel this sorrow that resides on my shoulders
I am not sorry

 

[slm4jesus]

I think it's incredibly sad. There is a God who loves you. You don't have to live in this darkness.

 

[♥Lovely♥]

I really liked it good job