What do you think of the preface of my new novel I am writing?

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My new book is called Travie Louw. It's about a thirteen year old boy with Autism. The story is from his sister's point of view, Trina. Here's the preface, lemme know what you think!

My brother's name is Travie Louw. He likes to say, then spell it.
"That's Louw. L-O-U-W. Like 'low'." he announces proudly. Just knowing that he can spell any word brings glory to him and us. People stare at him, and he just smiles and says, "Whatsa matter, Buddy? Cat got your tongue?" It's ironic. Because my brother, Travie, is blind and Austistic. How does he know people are staring at him? Senses.
"Thats S-E-N-S-E-S. I got 'em good." Travie declares. I smile. For such a, what people would call), poor soul, he couldn't be more happy. His Autism makes him just as mature as a three year old, literally. This makes me love him more...He's actually my twin thirteen year old brother.
This is my brother's story. This is Travie's life as shown and told to me. This is Travie Louw.


I know, It's not perfect. But I've just begun and I promise you, it will be emotional. Please comment and tell me what you think! Thanks!
 
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