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<blockquote data-quote="Virus7080" data-source="post: 2095092" data-attributes="member: 749075"><p>well i wrote this about my Gf. please feel free to tell me how i could make it better also, and honest opinions on it also please <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>****************************</p><p>song title: Her.</p><p></p><p>She’s everything to me</p><p>She’s my whole world</p><p>Makes me feel like no one else does</p><p>Feels as if my hearts been twirled</p><p>Never met a girl so caring</p><p>Wouldn’t have thought she’d be the one</p><p>But no one can really tell</p><p>Until their feelings have begun</p><p></p><p>Coz all i need is her</p><p>To hold on to</p><p>At the end of the day</p><p>No one else would do</p><p>She makes me feel so warm</p><p>Way down deep inside</p><p>Im loving this feeling</p><p>There is no downside</p><p>I never knew someone could do it for real</p><p>Make my life brighter</p><p>But honestly from the bottom of my heart</p><p>I know i love her </p><p></p><p>She is so beautiful</p><p>The way i look into her eyes</p><p>They’re so amazing</p><p>Coz they got me mesmerised</p><p>Every little thing about her</p><p>Including that gorgeous smile</p><p>Just looking at that</p><p>Makes it more than worth my while</p><p></p><p>She loves me, i love her</p><p>We’ll be together forever!</p><p></p><p>Coz all i need is her</p><p>To hold on to</p><p>At the end of the day</p><p>No one else would do</p><p>She makes me feel so warm</p><p>Way down deep inside</p><p>Im loving this feeling</p><p>There is no downside</p><p>I never knew someone could do it for real</p><p>Make my life brighter </p><p>But honestly from the bottom of my heart</p><p>I know i love her </p><p></p><p>*****************************************</p><p></p><p>what do you think? :]</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Virus7080, post: 2095092, member: 749075"] well i wrote this about my Gf. please feel free to tell me how i could make it better also, and honest opinions on it also please :) **************************** song title: Her. She’s everything to me She’s my whole world Makes me feel like no one else does Feels as if my hearts been twirled Never met a girl so caring Wouldn’t have thought she’d be the one But no one can really tell Until their feelings have begun Coz all i need is her To hold on to At the end of the day No one else would do She makes me feel so warm Way down deep inside Im loving this feeling There is no downside I never knew someone could do it for real Make my life brighter But honestly from the bottom of my heart I know i love her She is so beautiful The way i look into her eyes They’re so amazing Coz they got me mesmerised Every little thing about her Including that gorgeous smile Just looking at that Makes it more than worth my while She loves me, i love her We’ll be together forever! Coz all i need is her To hold on to At the end of the day No one else would do She makes me feel so warm Way down deep inside Im loving this feeling There is no downside I never knew someone could do it for real Make my life brighter But honestly from the bottom of my heart I know i love her ***************************************** what do you think? :] [/QUOTE]
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