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<blockquote data-quote="mRealLifeRosaliem" data-source="post: 2070941" data-attributes="member: 725379">Chloe Lewis has everything. A big house in Simcity, two parents who love her and give her everything she wants, and a little sister who idolizes her. Then one day her absentminded grandfather comes over, starts making waffles and then forgets about them. There&#039;s a fire, and Chloe attempts to put it out to save her grandfather, but ends up dying. (End of story, right? Wrong. It&#039;s just the beginning!) When Chloe wakes up she&#039;s in the sim afterlife, the place sims go when they die or are deleted. There she meets all kinds of sims; sims that came with the game and weren&#039;t wanted, sims that were accidentally killed, like her, and even, much to her horror, sims that were intentionally killed for fun. At first Chloe has no one. She&#039;s never known anybody who&#039;s died before. Then Chloe&#039;s best friend, Isabelle, shows up in the afterlife. Megan, the owner of the game, locked her in a room and set it on fire because Isabelle was a bit snobby and had a big mouth. Now Isabelle&#039;s a loner and won&#039;t talk to anybody, not even Chloe. Chloe wonders how Megan, the girl who had helped her parents raise her from a baby, could be so cruel. She asked around and everyone told her the same thing: That humans think Sims don&#039;t have feelings. Now if only there was a way to let Megan know that they do. Chloe asks Hannah, the first Sim Megan ever deleted, if there&#039;s a way and she tells her about a porthole, miles away, that leads to the human world. No one has ever tried it because they don&#039;t know if they can get back in, but Chloe decides to go search for it anyway. After many many days, Chloe finally finds the porthole. She jumps through the porthole and finds herself not only in the human world, but in human form. She finds Megan, who recognizes her as her favorite deceased sim in human form, and explains to her about the afterlife and Sims having feelings. Megan is horrified to learn that she had caused innocent Sims so much pain and suffering and promises to never intentionally kill or delete a sim again and to do everything within her power to prevent accidental death. Chloe gets ready to go into the toilet (that&#039;s the human end of the porthole) but first, Megan pulls up the sim game of Chloe&#039;s parents so she can check on them and let them know she&#039;s alright. Unfortunatly, she can&#039;t understand any of what they&#039;re saying (as a human she can&#039;t understand simlish) but she&#039;s overjoyed to see them anyway. Chloe climbs back in the toilet, magically turning into a sim as she does it, and Megan flushes her back to her home in the Sim afterlife. So what do you think?RATE (FROM 1-10)...The plot.The charactersThe namesWhat do you like most about it?What do you like least about it?What should I change? Should I change anything?</blockquote>

[QUOTE="mRealLifeRosaliem, post: 2070941, member: 725379"] Chloe Lewis has everything. A big house in Simcity, two parents who love her and give her everything she wants, and a little sister who idolizes her. Then one day her absentminded grandfather comes over, starts making waffles and then forgets about them. There's a fire, and Chloe attempts to put it out to save her grandfather, but ends up dying. (End of story, right? Wrong. It's just the beginning!) When Chloe wakes up she's in the sim afterlife, the place sims go when they die or are deleted. There she meets all kinds of sims; sims that came with the game and weren't wanted, sims that were accidentally killed, like her, and even, much to her horror, sims that were intentionally killed for fun. At first Chloe has no one. She's never known anybody who's died before. Then Chloe's best friend, Isabelle, shows up in the afterlife. Megan, the owner of the game, locked her in a room and set it on fire because Isabelle was a bit snobby and had a big mouth. Now Isabelle's a loner and won't talk to anybody, not even Chloe. Chloe wonders how Megan, the girl who had helped her parents raise her from a baby, could be so cruel. She asked around and everyone told her the same thing: That humans think Sims don't have feelings. Now if only there was a way to let Megan know that they do. Chloe asks Hannah, the first Sim Megan ever deleted, if there's a way and she tells her about a porthole, miles away, that leads to the human world. No one has ever tried it because they don't know if they can get back in, but Chloe decides to go search for it anyway. After many many days, Chloe finally finds the porthole. She jumps through the porthole and finds herself not only in the human world, but in human form. She finds Megan, who recognizes her as her favorite deceased sim in human form, and explains to her about the afterlife and Sims having feelings. Megan is horrified to learn that she had caused innocent Sims so much pain and suffering and promises to never intentionally kill or delete a sim again and to do everything within her power to prevent accidental death. Chloe gets ready to go into the toilet (that's the human end of the porthole) but first, Megan pulls up the sim game of Chloe's parents so she can check on them and let them know she's alright. Unfortunatly, she can't understand any of what they're saying (as a human she can't understand simlish) but she's overjoyed to see them anyway. Chloe climbs back in the toilet, magically turning into a sim as she does it, and Megan flushes her back to her home in the Sim afterlife. So what do you think? RATE (FROM 1-10)... The plot. The characters The names What do you like most about it? What do you like least about it? What should I change? Should I change anything? [/QUOTE]

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