what do you think of this introduction?

Danielle

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i have to write a small paper about what i would give john mayer for dinner based on his personality i started off with this:

John mayer is a talented pop and blues rock singer/songwriter. Just like his songs mayer is calm,witty,cool and filled with a one of a kind personality.

should i change it? and if you have any examples that would help too thanks:)
 
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