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What do you think of this part of my book?(short)?
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<blockquote data-quote="Nova" data-source="post: 2469759" data-attributes="member: 236647"><p>I like it, but I think you have a few too many commas. I do the same thing, try to put a bunch of different ides into one sentence, sort of like this, you know? But other than that it's pretty good, I'd read it. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>(Except for the fact that I knew a Gary and I hated him, buttttttttt....yeah.)</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Nova, post: 2469759, member: 236647"] I like it, but I think you have a few too many commas. I do the same thing, try to put a bunch of different ides into one sentence, sort of like this, you know? But other than that it's pretty good, I'd read it. :) (Except for the fact that I knew a Gary and I hated him, buttttttttt....yeah.) [/QUOTE]
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