What do you think of this poem/venting of mine? More :)?

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I can’t stand it anymore
This feeling of inadequacy
Why am I never good enough?
What the hell is wrong with me?
I try to be what you want
I desperately try to fit your dream
No matter how hard I try I can’t seem to be what you need
I can’t seem to please anyone though that’s my whole goal
Is there no one out there who cares?
Please just somebody love me
That’s all I ask
Just love me for who I am
Am I really that hard to love?
I may not be the perfect, beautiful girl of your dreams
But I’ll give my all for you
I’ll try to be everything you could want or need
But I don’t wanna hurt anymore
I give up
I can’t keep up this charade
Now I’ll just pray that there’s someone who will give their all for me
 
You sound young and in crush with someone who obviously does not feel the same.You are turning yourself into a doormat to be stepped on and taken advantage of...give yourself some time.there are plenty of people who feel the same way...you just need time to find each other! Try to be more confidant,otherwise you may get into trouble by 'giving your all'.
 
I would marry you. no kidding.
I love your poem, it reflects your true, deepest feelings.

and, don't worry.
there is somebody out there to love you.
who needs perfection?
when you'll have a friend,
that will always be there for you?
just keep being yourself,
and seeking your soul mate
soon enough you will find yourself
wrapped into his strong warm arms.
and then you'll know
what life is really all about.

GOOD LUCK!!

(sorry if it sucks. that was kinda random and sudden).
 
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