What do you think of this rough outline?

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Protectors - A race of not-quite-human beings. They are immortal and angelically beautiful, but they also have reproduction organs. Their emotions are much stronger than humans, so if another Protector, Hunter or Prey killed their mate, they would be distraught and would try to avenge them. They were created to protect the Prey. Humans.

Hunters - Like Protectors, but stronger and faster. They love feeding off humans energy. They target and track Prey with incredible agility.

Prey - Humans. Weak. Frail. In their eyes the Protectors and Hunters are gorgeous. This is one of the several features meant to attract Prey to them.

Protectors and Hunters growl, snarl, hiss and curl their lips back and bare their teeth as signs of aggression when provoked.

Lola is a Protector of a boy named Ross.

Ross is being tracked by Lola's once betrothed Peter. Peter turned to the Hunters when Lola refused to marry him. He is now seeking vengeance.

Lola and Ross are very close. Best friends. Lola doesn't know that Ross is in love with her until he attempts to kiss her one night (Protectors must always stay by the side of their Protectees). She slaps him across the face and knocks him out (thanks to her enormous strength).

She flees, crying, from his room and runs away.

Ross wakes up in an unfamiliar room. Peter is standing over him, fondling a knife. He tells Ross that he is going to kill him unless Lola returns and marries him and becomes a Hunter.

Indeed he is right, Lola returns to save Ross when he is reported missing. She and Peter have a fight, with her ending up bloody and beaten. She caves in to Peter's demands, to save Ross, because she realises she does love him.

She marries Peter in a dark ceremony, wearing a traditional black Hunter's dress, and then exchanges blood with Peter, and becomes a Hunter. Her lovely blue eyes turn a bloody red.

Ross is freed, yet tries to save Lola. She is writhing and twisting with agony as she turns. His blood is burning hers, and stopping her heart. The change is failing. She's going to die.

Ross does what he thinks is right. He grabs the knife that Peter dropped as he ran off, seeing his newly wed wife dying, cuts himself, and performs another blood exchange.

Lola is almost dead, bleeding on the floor. She kisses Ross sweetly, telling him she loved him, and dies. Once a Protector dies, they become nothing but spirits. She floats into the air and flies away.

In a ten years later flashforward, Ross is married to a nice girl called Nicole, with a little girl, Lola.

What did you think?
Spot on, Obsidian! I'll be posting it on www.sims2.ea.com.
 
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