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sammi

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Lisa was on the bus, dozing off in to a dream. Dreaming about a fabulous school trip to Fiji, Madagascar, Gold Coast, American or some fascinating island, in the sun, at the beach, basking peacefully, settling into her new home…
But no, she didn’t GET to occupy a life like that! She had to go to a FARM! All because of a stupid drawing out of a hat, just to break the tradition of the teachers` choice. A farm! Whoever put that in, was now Lisa’s enemy.
How very, very unexcitingly boringly DULL, this was going to be…
She had been looking forward to year 6 camp for YEARS! It had been a surprise visit to somewhere the year 6 class of the year had never been in the past. Teachers would only tell you where they were actually going the week before! What secrecy!
Previous years the 6`s had been to Japan, India, or at least the Gold Coast, at a theme park like Water-World or some other pleasurable, luxurious place.
“Class, we’re here!”, “Off the bus please,” Mrs. Van Dolin declared.
“Urghh!” Lisa moaned, annoyed with the whole conundrum; as well as being aroused from her peaceful sleep.


Thanku.I wrote this-I`m in year 6, 11yrs old-please help me finish it off Ideas would be enough-good ones.
 
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