RacetheDream
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Sorry if it sounds a little confusing, I'm still working on getting the description to sound right without spending hours explaining little aspects of them.
Title:
The Whimper's War
Plot:
Pandora and her brother, Neville, are part of the Royal Crayne Family, but when they are threatened and attacked by their own kind, their escape from their underwater cave to find themselves being forced into the life of the humans. When they soon make friends with people from a private school, will it distract them from their fight for survival when the war that starts raging beneath them starts to rise above land?
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I didn't take the name "Neville" because of Longbottom (though I love him), I took it because it had the old fashioned kinda feel as the rest of my characters.
Neville and Pandora and their kind are aliens that came to Earth a long time ago and got trapped underground where they started to build their own city, their race is called "Whimper" which is a name they were given when they were slaves and demanded their freedom (back on their own planet, where their kind decided to leave after the discrimination seemed to never cease), it was supposed to be very insulting and rude.
Does it sound interesting? I'm still working out some details and I'm editing a book trailer for it.
They look human except scales on their body and stones on their hands, which can be hidden by gloves and clothing. So it isn't like "OMG, the Ood are after us!"
(And if you got my Doctor Who reference I love you~)
Title:
The Whimper's War
Plot:
Pandora and her brother, Neville, are part of the Royal Crayne Family, but when they are threatened and attacked by their own kind, their escape from their underwater cave to find themselves being forced into the life of the humans. When they soon make friends with people from a private school, will it distract them from their fight for survival when the war that starts raging beneath them starts to rise above land?
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I didn't take the name "Neville" because of Longbottom (though I love him), I took it because it had the old fashioned kinda feel as the rest of my characters.
Neville and Pandora and their kind are aliens that came to Earth a long time ago and got trapped underground where they started to build their own city, their race is called "Whimper" which is a name they were given when they were slaves and demanded their freedom (back on their own planet, where their kind decided to leave after the discrimination seemed to never cease), it was supposed to be very insulting and rude.
Does it sound interesting? I'm still working out some details and I'm editing a book trailer for it.
They look human except scales on their body and stones on their hands, which can be hidden by gloves and clothing. So it isn't like "OMG, the Ood are after us!"
(And if you got my Doctor Who reference I love you~)