I recently asked if this was correct for grammar and punctuation:
"Episode two- Along with a short summery of the events happening on <name>, we interviewed Tristan's life coach <name>.
Episode three- Along with a short summery of the events happening on <name>, we interviewed Tristan's sister <name>.
Episode four- Along with a second exclusive interview with Tristan's sister <name>, we gave a short summery of the events happening on <name>."
Someone responded with "(Corrections placed within square brackets.)
Episode two- Along with a short summery of the events happening on <name>, we interviewed Tristan's life coach[,] <name>.
Episode three- Along with a short summery of the events happening on <name>, we interviewed Tristan's sister[,] <name>.
Episode four- Along with a second exclusive interview with Tristan's sister[,] <name>, we gave a short summery of the events happening on <name>."
Are they correct or did they make mistakes with the commas?
"Episode two- Along with a short summery of the events happening on <name>, we interviewed Tristan's life coach <name>.
Episode three- Along with a short summery of the events happening on <name>, we interviewed Tristan's sister <name>.
Episode four- Along with a second exclusive interview with Tristan's sister <name>, we gave a short summery of the events happening on <name>."
Someone responded with "(Corrections placed within square brackets.)
Episode two- Along with a short summery of the events happening on <name>, we interviewed Tristan's life coach[,] <name>.
Episode three- Along with a short summery of the events happening on <name>, we interviewed Tristan's sister[,] <name>.
Episode four- Along with a second exclusive interview with Tristan's sister[,] <name>, we gave a short summery of the events happening on <name>."
Are they correct or did they make mistakes with the commas?