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<blockquote data-quote="JohnJames" data-source="post: 2250496" data-attributes="member: 784678"><p>hi am writing a story about a killer but dont no which one to pick there made up by me but what one do you thinks best and why, and could you tell me why you didnt like the others and what ideas you hhave on wht the story could be about on the one killer you chose and what you think should happen to her and other ideas you have for her heres the killers:</p><p></p><p></p><p>serial killer 1:</p><p>Rose smith</p><p>age :37 years old</p><p>occupation: police officer</p><p>her looks are : attractive slim pretty shoulder length brown hair</p><p>background: she was abused by her father who made her believe that women are worthless and now the abused has become the abuser.</p><p>Accomplice: a low-life teen called joseph wedlow who she once arrested but now has took under her wing.</p><p>victims: All women from 16-28</p><p>weapon: Taser, gun, Bat and her hands.</p><p>M.O: she uses her job to gain trust offering the women lifts to there home etc or asks them for help but once alone she tases them or knocks them out then takes them to a council house owned by joseph and they torture then kill there victims then leaves there bodies in public areas.</p><p></p><p>serial killer 2:</p><p>nurse maggie cline</p><p>age : 27 years old</p><p>job: freelance nurse </p><p>looks: young , sweet ,caring</p><p>family: sister who is deceased</p><p>background: when she was nine her little sister was deadly ill feeling sorry for her sister she suffocated her it was then she realised that she enjoyed the power of deciding who lives and who dies causing her to get a job as a freelance nurse going round working in schools jails hospitals anywhere were a nurse is needed but she doesnt leave without sending people to the morgue</p><p>accomplice: none</p><p>victims: varies</p><p>weapons: poison or she suffocates </p><p>M.O: people think she's caring and a loving nurse but soon she kills them in what she believes is a act of mercy.</p><p></p><p>serial killer 3:</p><p>julie knowsley</p><p>age: 34</p><p>job: secutary at the police department </p><p>family: husband john smith and 14 year old son joseph smith.</p><p>looks: dark brown hair tide up in a bun pretty women, wears sophiticated clothing for work (shirt and black skirt) at home just casual clothes</p><p>background: growing up she was always cheeky and naughtys but in her teens showed a sadistic and cruel side but that side is easily masked by her sweet kind side</p><p>accomplice: none</p><p>victims: men or women all ranging from 18 to 28 in age</p><p>weapons: taser, hammer, rope , whip</p><p>M.O: using her position in the police department she can keep an eye on the evidence they find and dispose of it, outside shopping districts she will ask for help with her shopping when by the car she will knock them out with the taser or hammer then her accomplice will throw the victim in the car she will then take them to the family caravan where her and the accomplice will torture then kill them then leave there body in family areas (parks beachs etc) but no one will suspect her as she is just a trustworthy working mum.</p><p></p><p>serial killer 4:</p><p>vicky mckarthy </p><p>age: 23</p><p>occupation: prostitute/ exotic dancer</p><p>looks: good looking slim tall long dark brown hair with green eyes</p><p>background: growing up she was raped by her male family members until she was 13 and she just ran away becoming a prostitute to survive now 23 and with lots of bad experience with men she has a growing rage with them and with working as a prostitute she has lots of buisness with men but at the end of the night in the middle of intercourse she suprises them with a bullet to the head and robs all there possession leaving them dead and nude with no clothes jewelly or possessions money with them, showing them to never underestimate women.</p><p>victims: men that resemble her uncle and father or men that take women for granted like married men who shouldnt be out with prostitutes.</p><p>weapons: revolver but sometimes she tortures them so a whip and taser and drug.</p><p>M.O: she looks out for married men or men who resemble her father in the strip club she works in then seducing them she takes them back to her appartment where she first offers them a drink then has sex with them during that she will shoot them or she may taser them or if they have drank the drink she offers them which is drugged they will fall unconcious waking up on the bed which there tide up to she will question them about wht they think about women and where there wife is (if there married) or wht they think about her with each question they ignore or answer wrong she will whip them then finally shoot them strip them of there clothes jewellry wallet etc then pack her bags and move to another appartment leaving there bodies to be found but she just lives life until she finds her next victim.</p><p></p><p></p><p>so who do you like the best and why do you have any ideas for her story wht do you think should happen to her or have you got any ideas of anything for my killers or wht dhould happen to them plz use detail , n could u tell me wht u didnt like about the others.</p><p></p><p>thanks</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="JohnJames, post: 2250496, member: 784678"] hi am writing a story about a killer but dont no which one to pick there made up by me but what one do you thinks best and why, and could you tell me why you didnt like the others and what ideas you hhave on wht the story could be about on the one killer you chose and what you think should happen to her and other ideas you have for her heres the killers: serial killer 1: Rose smith age :37 years old occupation: police officer her looks are : attractive slim pretty shoulder length brown hair background: she was abused by her father who made her believe that women are worthless and now the abused has become the abuser. Accomplice: a low-life teen called joseph wedlow who she once arrested but now has took under her wing. victims: All women from 16-28 weapon: Taser, gun, Bat and her hands. M.O: she uses her job to gain trust offering the women lifts to there home etc or asks them for help but once alone she tases them or knocks them out then takes them to a council house owned by joseph and they torture then kill there victims then leaves there bodies in public areas. serial killer 2: nurse maggie cline age : 27 years old job: freelance nurse looks: young , sweet ,caring family: sister who is deceased background: when she was nine her little sister was deadly ill feeling sorry for her sister she suffocated her it was then she realised that she enjoyed the power of deciding who lives and who dies causing her to get a job as a freelance nurse going round working in schools jails hospitals anywhere were a nurse is needed but she doesnt leave without sending people to the morgue accomplice: none victims: varies weapons: poison or she suffocates M.O: people think she's caring and a loving nurse but soon she kills them in what she believes is a act of mercy. serial killer 3: julie knowsley age: 34 job: secutary at the police department family: husband john smith and 14 year old son joseph smith. looks: dark brown hair tide up in a bun pretty women, wears sophiticated clothing for work (shirt and black skirt) at home just casual clothes background: growing up she was always cheeky and naughtys but in her teens showed a sadistic and cruel side but that side is easily masked by her sweet kind side accomplice: none victims: men or women all ranging from 18 to 28 in age weapons: taser, hammer, rope , whip M.O: using her position in the police department she can keep an eye on the evidence they find and dispose of it, outside shopping districts she will ask for help with her shopping when by the car she will knock them out with the taser or hammer then her accomplice will throw the victim in the car she will then take them to the family caravan where her and the accomplice will torture then kill them then leave there body in family areas (parks beachs etc) but no one will suspect her as she is just a trustworthy working mum. serial killer 4: vicky mckarthy age: 23 occupation: prostitute/ exotic dancer looks: good looking slim tall long dark brown hair with green eyes background: growing up she was raped by her male family members until she was 13 and she just ran away becoming a prostitute to survive now 23 and with lots of bad experience with men she has a growing rage with them and with working as a prostitute she has lots of buisness with men but at the end of the night in the middle of intercourse she suprises them with a bullet to the head and robs all there possession leaving them dead and nude with no clothes jewelly or possessions money with them, showing them to never underestimate women. victims: men that resemble her uncle and father or men that take women for granted like married men who shouldnt be out with prostitutes. weapons: revolver but sometimes she tortures them so a whip and taser and drug. M.O: she looks out for married men or men who resemble her father in the strip club she works in then seducing them she takes them back to her appartment where she first offers them a drink then has sex with them during that she will shoot them or she may taser them or if they have drank the drink she offers them which is drugged they will fall unconcious waking up on the bed which there tide up to she will question them about wht they think about women and where there wife is (if there married) or wht they think about her with each question they ignore or answer wrong she will whip them then finally shoot them strip them of there clothes jewellry wallet etc then pack her bags and move to another appartment leaving there bodies to be found but she just lives life until she finds her next victim. so who do you like the best and why do you have any ideas for her story wht do you think should happen to her or have you got any ideas of anything for my killers or wht dhould happen to them plz use detail , n could u tell me wht u didnt like about the others. thanks [/QUOTE]
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