which introduction is better?

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Doing a speech on how media effects teens?
intro # 1 what comes to your mind when you think of media? the glamorous movie stars, shocking reality shows, boys with larger than life abs, girls who look like they go tanning 5 times a week and all the eat is a piece of lattice and magazines cover filled with news like is Justin bieber really becoming a dad? and is Kim Kardashian wedding only lasted for 72 days!

intro #2 what comes to your mind when you think of media? the glamorous movie stars, shocking reality shows, boys with larger than life abs and girls who look like they go tanning 5 times a week and all the eat is a piece of lattice
 
intro #2 What comes to your mind when you think of media? The glamorous movie stars, shocking reality shows, boys with larger than life abs, and girls that are absurdly skinny.
 
both are horrible..honestly what grade are you in...

but if i had to choose, it would be the second one.
 
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