Or something along the lines? I was thinking a girl has a twin sister who she despises (ironically, because every one else loves her twin.) One goes to a privledged boarding school across the country, very prissy and needy and the other one is rebellious tomboy with a quick temper.
What if the rebellious tomboy is sick of every one being afraid of her, so she pretends to be her twin sister and lives a double life? She discovers she has feelings for her nerdy guy frienemy who she always makes fun of, but discovers the only way he'll want her is if she keeps pretending to be her sister. Then their mother gets into a fatal car crash and her twin comes back. I need help with it. How can I change it so it's less cheesy?
What if the rebellious tomboy is sick of every one being afraid of her, so she pretends to be her twin sister and lives a double life? She discovers she has feelings for her nerdy guy frienemy who she always makes fun of, but discovers the only way he'll want her is if she keeps pretending to be her sister. Then their mother gets into a fatal car crash and her twin comes back. I need help with it. How can I change it so it's less cheesy?