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Hi, I have one page essay about my turning point. I wrote over limit and want to cut it off too [The answer should be between 500-700 words] My deadline is tomorrow!!! Any edits and ideas are also really appreciate.
Thank you so much
When my sister turned to face and gave me last smile before entered departure gate, I felt my heart sank. I have not seen her for all 10 months while she has studied abroad. All my thought blessed her safety and got great experience for her life. But there’s one little voice in my mind told me I was afraid. I was afraid she won’t be my sister who I knew so well, throughout my life. I believed this time will be one of significant moments in her life. But I never wondered it will be my turning point as well.
When I was young, I never thought about going abroad for education. It was so expensive and seemed impossible. My sister who always opens my vision, took the student exchange competition and she won. She made a decision and preparation everything, she could do to ready before ask for helps which excess her capacity from others. A month ago, my parents called her at host’s house. They were worry about her very much although all the time we contacted via e-mail. First question my father asked was “How are you, my daughter” Her clear happy voice answered immediately that she fined and enjoyed live there so much. Also, each e-mail, they fulfilled with wonderful experience. For students who went to abroad for first, it might have obstacle on their way. But my sister never mentioned it, maybe she didn’t think, it was a problem. In few months, I saw her rapid growth. I admired how maturity she developed herself very well. Also, this made me saw my weakness that I always neglected.
I have always wanted to be more be more organized, concentrated to my dream and reached my aims than now I was. I am good student, got good grades in school. I worked with friends and people well and don’t make problems to my parents. My life is happy but I considered that was not enough to fulfill my expectation about myself. My sister never told me to do this or that things but she showed me the way she did and brought me to see worldwide by her experience. One day we made a call again. My sister and I shared many things happening to each other. We talked, teased and laughed. I joked about her weight by caring about her health. And before she hung up on the call the last sentences she talked to me “Don’t play to much computer, dear. There are load of wonderful things to do for life”
Suddenly, I was only laugh on, because this sentence hit straight to my heart sharply. Why this sentence important? It is concrete and clear example. It pointed on my unconsidered to my dream. Although I had many good purposes but they are useless if I didn’t take an action. Why I spent so much time in the ideal world and do nothing to reached goals on the earth, I had stood. And the most important thing I realized. I was not afraid my sister will be stranger. But it was turned to terrible fear that maybe I’m not good enough to be her sister anymore. I made a decision I have to change to be better person for my sister and for myself.
At that night, I dragged my plan which left in drawer for a long time and revised who I want to be. For now, I didn’t only wait for chance but move my activation on. From the small point such as I pay attention to uninterested classes and knowledge more than before. I always love new challenge and now I have more brave to offer myself to do so many things. I attended to pharmacy for society and camped out to North-Eastern of Thailand. I got experience that I never met before. I closed to local people and understand them so much better. I offer myself to professor to help her research project. I challenge so many new things every day and can tell myself this is first step of my enjoy life. I feel everything is so much brighter in my eyes. I wondered I can do great many things in this time. Without spark from my sister who younger than me for 5 years, I don’t know how long I had growth and maturity. All of these good experiences I have got, have to appreciate her. She makes me realize and discover myself but also put me in deep consideration and push me so hard toward to reach my goals. Not only visible growth but also in mental is invaluable. I believe turning point can come into everybody’ lives, it’s without fanfare or any announcement to express itself. But it never is true turning point deep without deep understanding. This is my important turning point because it came with my realization is who I am, what my mistakes were in the past, and what I want to do in the future.
Thank you so much
When my sister turned to face and gave me last smile before entered departure gate, I felt my heart sank. I have not seen her for all 10 months while she has studied abroad. All my thought blessed her safety and got great experience for her life. But there’s one little voice in my mind told me I was afraid. I was afraid she won’t be my sister who I knew so well, throughout my life. I believed this time will be one of significant moments in her life. But I never wondered it will be my turning point as well.
When I was young, I never thought about going abroad for education. It was so expensive and seemed impossible. My sister who always opens my vision, took the student exchange competition and she won. She made a decision and preparation everything, she could do to ready before ask for helps which excess her capacity from others. A month ago, my parents called her at host’s house. They were worry about her very much although all the time we contacted via e-mail. First question my father asked was “How are you, my daughter” Her clear happy voice answered immediately that she fined and enjoyed live there so much. Also, each e-mail, they fulfilled with wonderful experience. For students who went to abroad for first, it might have obstacle on their way. But my sister never mentioned it, maybe she didn’t think, it was a problem. In few months, I saw her rapid growth. I admired how maturity she developed herself very well. Also, this made me saw my weakness that I always neglected.
I have always wanted to be more be more organized, concentrated to my dream and reached my aims than now I was. I am good student, got good grades in school. I worked with friends and people well and don’t make problems to my parents. My life is happy but I considered that was not enough to fulfill my expectation about myself. My sister never told me to do this or that things but she showed me the way she did and brought me to see worldwide by her experience. One day we made a call again. My sister and I shared many things happening to each other. We talked, teased and laughed. I joked about her weight by caring about her health. And before she hung up on the call the last sentences she talked to me “Don’t play to much computer, dear. There are load of wonderful things to do for life”
Suddenly, I was only laugh on, because this sentence hit straight to my heart sharply. Why this sentence important? It is concrete and clear example. It pointed on my unconsidered to my dream. Although I had many good purposes but they are useless if I didn’t take an action. Why I spent so much time in the ideal world and do nothing to reached goals on the earth, I had stood. And the most important thing I realized. I was not afraid my sister will be stranger. But it was turned to terrible fear that maybe I’m not good enough to be her sister anymore. I made a decision I have to change to be better person for my sister and for myself.
At that night, I dragged my plan which left in drawer for a long time and revised who I want to be. For now, I didn’t only wait for chance but move my activation on. From the small point such as I pay attention to uninterested classes and knowledge more than before. I always love new challenge and now I have more brave to offer myself to do so many things. I attended to pharmacy for society and camped out to North-Eastern of Thailand. I got experience that I never met before. I closed to local people and understand them so much better. I offer myself to professor to help her research project. I challenge so many new things every day and can tell myself this is first step of my enjoy life. I feel everything is so much brighter in my eyes. I wondered I can do great many things in this time. Without spark from my sister who younger than me for 5 years, I don’t know how long I had growth and maturity. All of these good experiences I have got, have to appreciate her. She makes me realize and discover myself but also put me in deep consideration and push me so hard toward to reach my goals. Not only visible growth but also in mental is invaluable. I believe turning point can come into everybody’ lives, it’s without fanfare or any announcement to express itself. But it never is true turning point deep without deep understanding. This is my important turning point because it came with my realization is who I am, what my mistakes were in the past, and what I want to do in the future.