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Rant-Whine-Complain-Vent
Would you c/c on my little rant, if you will call it so?
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<blockquote data-quote="PoetryWriter" data-source="post: 2523788" data-attributes="member: 861716"><p>The breeze of an open school door</p><p>Creeps up my shirt and lays ice over by body.</p><p>Shivering, I put up my hood,</p><p>Melting ice off of my head. </p><p></p><p>The dean walks past </p><p>Eyes narrowed looking for violators</p><p>Of all his fairy-land rules</p><p>That are believed in like the fairies themselves</p><p>And enforced like so.</p><p></p><p>I fall into the stone wall,</p><p>Hood up, cold receding</p><p>Those with shirts up to their middle</p><p>Hats on, denim underwear </p><p>POP like the cleavage from their shirts</p><p></p><p>And he'll walk past them all</p><p>Fairies dancing away on sugar tip toes</p><p>But eating rotten apples.</p><p>Hoods, they are a violation, worthy of In School Suspension</p><p>He snarled, pointing</p><p>Singling out me. </p><p>Defenseless, I open my mouth</p><p>But it is all stuffed up with bobbing butts</p><p>That walk right by</p><p>And stomachs with blinking signs </p><p>to say</p><p>I was just a little cold after a while</p><p></p><p>Embarrassed, I rip it off</p><p>and cast my eyes down</p><p>Feeling more chilled than before.</p><p>AMEN to ya both, and I love your attitude, BG!</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="PoetryWriter, post: 2523788, member: 861716"] The breeze of an open school door Creeps up my shirt and lays ice over by body. Shivering, I put up my hood, Melting ice off of my head. The dean walks past Eyes narrowed looking for violators Of all his fairy-land rules That are believed in like the fairies themselves And enforced like so. I fall into the stone wall, Hood up, cold receding Those with shirts up to their middle Hats on, denim underwear POP like the cleavage from their shirts And he'll walk past them all Fairies dancing away on sugar tip toes But eating rotten apples. Hoods, they are a violation, worthy of In School Suspension He snarled, pointing Singling out me. Defenseless, I open my mouth But it is all stuffed up with bobbing butts That walk right by And stomachs with blinking signs to say I was just a little cold after a while Embarrassed, I rip it off and cast my eyes down Feeling more chilled than before. AMEN to ya both, and I love your attitude, BG! [/QUOTE]
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