Would you please comment on my lyrics?

mad_mattie_88

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This day is far from done
The war at home is nigh
To death, you’ll soon succumb
Gun, needle, gas or fry

Debt to society
Far too much blood’s been spilled
Incapable of guilt
Infamy takes no skill

Unsound
Just a number, a mark on his wall
Unfound
Missing person, a needle in straw

When a man is wanted by the law…
Pacific submission, the unrealistic resolve
Violence is the only option now…
Militant and ruthless, failure will not be allowed

(Guitar: slow rest and build-up to the next verse)

An endless appetite
Victims for sustenance
The will to kill again
Let the carnage commence

Destruction carries on
For how long, no one knows
The war at home’s been waged
Through veins, his hate still flows

Gunned down
Crimson pavement, the rain will soon cleanse
Earthbound
To a hole in the ground, you’ll descend

When a man is wanted by the law…
He’ll try to take them with him, down to hell, he’s sure to fall
Consequence of murder so severe…
Staring death into its face, your mind so full of fear…

(Guitar Solo)

It would probably help you enjoy this more if you read it in Bruce Dickinson of Iron Maiden's singing voice.
 
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