(I posted this not too long ago, but I made a few changes)
This is the beginning of my recent story. I was just wondering what people thought of it.
You would never guess the house was haunted. The floors didn't creak, even when being stepped on. Moans and groans couldn't be heard through...
(I posted this not too long ago, but I made a few changes)
This is the beginning of my recent story. I was just wondering what people thought of it.
You would never guess the house was haunted. The floors didn't creak, even when being stepped on. Moans and groans couldn't be heard through...
...chapter. mind taking a look? Okay, so It is fairly fresh and for WEEKS I have gotten nowhere with the start of my novel...
What do you think?
Would you keep reading?
Rate out of ten?
Did the last part seem to quick?
It's a fantasy... but obviously there are no signs of that just yet :)
P.S...
Hey B&A,
Welcome to the second Writers Challenge (no, you didn't have to enter the first to enter this). I hope you enjoy it.
RULES & GUIDELINES
* Do not copy any sentences, paragraphs etc from a book
* Word limit: 150 - 500 words for stories, ten lines to twenty-four for poems
* You do not...
You know the people I mean. The people who, instead of just asking for help, will instead simply copy out the question they have been set as homework.
Am I the only one who gets annoyed by this? I don't mind helping people out, but I don't like it when people are lazy and just expect the...
Regarding word count, how long are your "chapters"? I set an overall word count goal for my current work-in-progress because I tend to write over a reasonable number of words and end up having to cut a lot of it out. I'm basically underwriting my first draft this time then I plan to fill in some...
Okay so he is good looking, blue eyes and light brown hair.
he Has sort of a country edge to him, no cowboy twang to his voice or anything...just hard working, grown up in country etc.
I want his name unusal and I love the name Jasper but don't think it will sute for a number of reasons...