I'm aware of what I'm writing and how I'm starting my sentences. But, when I read over the first draft, I'm always shocked with the repetition. My third person novels don't seem to be too repetitive (I find it easier to write.)
For example, do any of you notice the sentences start with 'It, I...
...of interest in BC? Does anyone have knowledge of the procedure required to obtain a copy of the RCMP investigation file (where the investigation is "ongoing") but, after more than 2 years, no one is being charged.
FOR THE PERSON WHO ASKED "what do the colors in the gay pride flag signify?"?
The original flag had 8 stripes, w/ each color representing a particular component of the gay community: hot pink=sex, red=life, orange=healing, yellow=sun, green=nature, turquoise=arts, indigo= harmony, and...
is not payed for their time? My wife works for a company X and is payed only commission... Company X has these mandatory meetings every few weeks and sometimes a couple of weeks in a row (always being on Sunday nights during church). She did not attend this last Sunday meeting for two reasons...
Hey everyone. I'm writing a little short story for english class. Upwards of 30 pages. I was wondering which style I should do?
Should I go 3rd Present, 3rd Past? 1st Present? 1st Past?
I'm at a loss here.. Any advice would be appreciated.
Thanks in advance. =D
I know who most of us dont likee. But who annoys u the most that answers questions on here and reports for no reason. Take a wild guess on whos mines is lol
...years later? And did show negative or positive feelings towards you? I had to wear head-gear and was very skinny in High School and there was this group of girls who would constantly be vicious and nasty towards me about it. Spreading rumors that I was 'anorexic' and such. They were very...
There's a guy I used to be really close to years ago when we were 10/11 in year 6 at school. We fell out rather abruptly before we started secondary school and that was it. Despite that, he was always in my form group throughout five years of secondary school and he lives literally 3 minutes...
OKay i was watching tv and I saw this commercial with homeless kids on it. I though sorry for them it really didn't have that effect on me and then the abused animal commercial came on awwwwww! :( i thought it was terrible so me i am an animal person but i love kids but most of my friends are...
...treated in an American hospital? What would the cultural differences be in that setting and what would be the most noticable differences in care between the two healthcare systems (besides payment, of course)?
Im looking more for different meanings for words, ppl from the UK not being used to...
I was told that they no longer mail out coggins or email copies due to them being lost in the mail..Ive never heard of this before, and its a real pain. Anyone else?
When I was watching the last episode of "Extreme Makeover: Home Edition", I noticed that one man greeted Brian (the man with paralysis) by touching heads. Is this the proper way to greet someone who has no movement in his arms/hands, or is this only for friends/acquaintances? Or is it better to...