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    descriptive writing personifications for fashions?

    personifications describing designer brands fashion Christian louboutins Barney Selfridges Alexander mcqueen chanel like the film confession of a shopaholic on how shes addicted to shopping
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    I need help writing a spanking scene?

    In my story, the main character, Samantha, is going to be spanked by her father for getting Fs on her report card and flunking school, and misbehaving. She is going to be spanked with her fathers cane. She is going to be given corner time first then be spanked 50 times with the cane, counting...
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    Would you please rate this writing (total) on a scale of 1 to 10 (ten being

    high) and tell me why? *** Disclaimer*** some people may find this a little scary. His greasy hands reached through the darkness, strait for my throat. I could see his ice blue eyes looking directly into my soul and his upturn mouth that stretched across his teeth in some horrible mockery of a...
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    Writing a sci-fi novel and I'm going crazy?

    I'm in the middle of writing this great story, but I'm losing my ever-loving mind. I'm about thirteen chapters into this book, but I keep going back to change things. I can't get progress because I keep going backwards. Do you writers go through this? Any tips or words of encouragement you...
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    Is my writing any good?

    For a thirteen year old. This a piece about halfway through the first chapter of one of my stories. Now, let me tell you something about huge, unfamiliar houses. Never try to navigate through one without a knowledgeable guide. Not only will it save you loads of time, but it will also prevent...
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    I need to know if my writing is good?

    Last time I posted this, someone said it's too descriptive. I'd like more opinions. Please do tell my about the writing style, mistakes and opinions on how to make it better. She whirled the metal as swiftly as she could, till it became a blur of white and blue. Years of dedicated training had...
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    Need help in writing a Recommendation Letter?

    So far I know to start of by typing To Whom it may Concern, but the heading do I type my address name &etc or the name of the person I'm recommencing? Plz help
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    Im writing a story and i need help?

    Ok so im writing a story and the main character has an alarm clock that recognises her voice and talks at will. What would be a good name for the clock?
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    How do I know if my writing is any good?

    i'm considering going to college for english/journalism. and i really enjoy writing, and books, and poetry, etc., but how do I know if my writing is good enough? right now i'm in an ap language and composition class, and my essays this year so far were: Narrative essay: 93% Descriptive essay...
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    Writing an essay on teen pregnancy?

    How can I start my essay on teen pregnancy. How should I start out ?
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    What do you think of my writing?

    Chapter 1 1 " I finally have you cornered." 2 Aurora Dragomir smiled at me, her tiny dimples flashed at me, crossing her arms against her chest, leaning her small frame against the slink gray door. 3 So innocent yet deadly. 4 "You can't ignore me me forever," she said. 5 I pointingly ignored...
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    HELP with my Descriptive Essay Writing?

    I finally found something to describe, but I am terrible with writing.... So I put this together. I just have one major question. HOW AM I DOING? Lol Let me know please thank you! .... Prologue When I was 11 years old, and still loved to play games. My favorite one to play was hide and seek. I...
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    what is the best thing to write about when writing a mla paper on alfred lord...

    ...tennysons poems;...? what is the best thing to write about when writing a mla paper on alfred lord tennysons poems; after thought, break, break, break, a farewell, and blow, bugle, blow
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    dialogue writing between mother and child about spending vacations?

    Mother: Vacations are not about sleeping late and watching TV all day… You can take up photography, learn an instrument, learn judo… Son/daughter: I really worked hard for my exam, I do want to rest. Dialogues should be taking atleast 10 turns each.
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    Being ignored on a writing forum?

    So I joined this forum like a month ago, I thought it would be more polite to make an effort to get to know people and help others before posting anything myself. So I haven't asked for any help yet. I introduced myself and no one answered me. Since then I've replied to people's blogs, edited...
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    Critique my writing please?

    I would love some feedback on the opening for a story... It's meant to be a thriller about a family that seems perfect on the outside but on the inside has a horrible web of dirty secrets... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I suppose I...
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    How about this interesting writing topic?

    When the last leaves fall and the first snow lies on the ground, the...knows it is time to..... Use these words as the introduction to an imaginative piece, using your own choice of subject and activity. Any ideas of this topic? My ideas are dull, just wondering what others think.. Thank you! :D
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    Anyone writing their own story and need feedback?

    If there's anyone who wants someone to comment (and suggest improvements) on their stories, i'd be happy to help! i discovered that i love helping others improve their stories and i want to help more people! if you have a story that you want me to edit, just send me an email ([email protected])
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    Writing a blog/What topics interest you the most?

    I am starting a blog but i wanted to focus on one particular topic for my blogs like a theme. I would like to get some feed back from you to get an idea what topics people are most interested in.
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    I need help writing a memorable statement?

    I need help writing a memorable statement in my speech tomorrow! help me. Im doing it on how "people expectation of me to an extent" is my pet peeve
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