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  1. L

    Hows this Prologue? wrote a while ago?

    "mommy!! I don' wanna gooo!" a little girl screamed clutching her moms legs. "Hellow, im Keanan!" a little boy says to the girl running up to her. "Hi! I’m Evangaline! but can cawll me Evan!" she says letting go of her moms legs looking him in the eyes. "okay! lets gow pway in the sandbox!"...
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    I wrote this short funny skit.. Why can't I write another?

    Bill: (knocks on door, he has no nose, red eyes and in black) Hayley: (opens the door yawning she has brown hair in a pony tail wearing pajamas and glases) What? Bill: Hayley, I've come to kill you. Hayley: Oh, was that today? Bill: Yes, I marked it on my calender. (shows a piece of paper...
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    Is it ok if I wrote a line or two about the characters and how they had sex?(Serious

    answers only please)? For school, I read a story which had a little bit of sex in it, but it was actually an important part of the story believe it or not. Is it ok, that I even wrote that they had sex? Was it appropriate for a paper? I did not go into any details, just said what happened. If I...
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    Is this scene i wrote okay?

    It is actually a dream. I would like you to tell me everything that is good and bad with this paragraph. Please don't be too harsh even though criticizing is welcome :D The sky was darkening by each tick of a second as if though an eclipse was taking place. The clouds swam into the sky within a...
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    I understand Jimmy Carter recently wrote a book and is on a book tour. Why...

    ...would anyone buy it? This man was the second worst president in US history- (Obama clinched the number one spot in less than one year in office). What could this dried up old peanut farmer who is a national embarrassment possibly have of interest to say and who would read it?
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    When did Rossini wrote the piece "introduction, theme and variations for clarinet"?

    When did Rossini wrote the piece "introduction, theme and variations for clarinet"? I'm making a project on this piece, and i can barely find information about it. As much as i could find, nobody knows when it was written and even if Rossini wrote it alone! If anybody could help me i'll be very...
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    what do you think of the Christian song i wrote?

    i do not want anyone to dis my beliefs cause i believe what i believe and you can believe what you want but i pray you come to Christ, so let me know what you think of my song :) Verse 1. where are the happy days Where is all gods praise Why have we turned away When he is the only way Pre...
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    i need feedback on this rap i wrote?

    Ok so this rap is about my people, the Assyrians (Mesopotamians) Hope it's good and hope you like it.. Also, don't forget to give feedback on what i can fix or improve on. Peace It's upsetting and depressing to see that the end of our dynasty has come to this, Where once known as mesopotamian...
  9. R

    Would a celebrity like Jennifer Aniston write back if i wrote her a letter ?

    And does any1 know how 2 reach her ?
  10. R

    Would a celebrity like Jennifer Aniston write back if i wrote her a letter ?

    And does any1 know how 2 reach her ?
  11. S

    Who Wrote 'The Titanic' ?

    I Wanna Know Who Wrote The Titanic ... I Thought It Was 'Nicholad Sparks' . The Titanic The One With Leornardo DiCaprio (: . Thanks Alot .!
  12. D

    I never wrote back after vacation?

    Had been in love with two men. The 1st one - I reconciliated with and am now engaged to. The other - I wroe to let him know I really loved him and nothing was his fault but bad timing in short. e enjoys writing to me and I him, but I can't be unfaithful to my fiance. So when I went on...
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    Could someone please review/critique this essay I wrote on the nature of conflict?

    The piece is a bit too long to post in question format, so here's the link: http://www.writingforums.org/blog.php?b=2689 Any thoughts, comments, suggestions, critiques or general impressions would be IMMENSELY appreciated. And I thank you very much for taking the time to do this for me!
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    Anyone wants to take the time to critique a short introduction I wrote?

    It's for a short-narrative I'm currently writing. The sun was about to set soon, and Victor wanted to avoid finding his way back home at dark. Once the sun sets, the woods degenerate into pure darkness. The singing of the birds die down, and the sounds of unknown creatures reverberate through...
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    Anyone wants to take the time to critique a short introduction I wrote?

    It's for a short-narrative I'm currently writing. The sun was about to set soon, and Victor wanted to avoid finding his way back home at dark. Once the sun sets, the woods degenerate into pure darkness. The singing of the birds die down, and the sounds of unknown creatures reverberate through...
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    Anyone wants to take the time to critique a short introduction I wrote?

    It's for a short-narrative I'm currently writing. The sun was about to set soon, and Victor wanted to avoid finding his way back home at dark. Once the sun sets, the woods degenerate into pure darkness. The singing of the birds die down, and the sounds of unknown creatures reverberate through...
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    What should I name the movies I wrote scripts for?

    I need some ideas naming these movie scripts I wrote. In parentheses is the genre and my top idea for a name. Let me know what you think or provide me with your ideas. A. A movie about a corrupt high school staff that doesn't care about the kids, and automatically leads to a school shooting...
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    I wrote a Story off of a Song, how to get it published?

    Ok, I wrote a whole 300(estimate) page off of the song Copperhead Road by Steve Earle. The story uses the Characters from the song(John Lee Pettimore and hes family). I use the same car as in the song a Big Block 50s Dodge and it follows the plot of the song. Now to get this story published, I'm...
  19. J

    Who wrote the big band arrangement for Blue Rondo A La Turk (Originally by

    Dave Brubeck)? Really just trying to find this song, played it in high school and it was awesome!
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    hey can anyone help me coming up with a melody for a song i wrote?

    I wrote something that may be pecieved as a poem, but i really think it should become a song. I wote this based on an experience i was going through. I had never written anything like it before. I Ithink i is good for being my first piece of writing, can someone help me put a melody to it please?
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