A blast from the past, tell me what you think?

TheBigBadHornyBull

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This is my very first poem. I found it the other day cleaning out my closet. I wrote it way back in the 4th grade, so it's a bit weak.


The Sun

I see the sun behind the cloud. Show us your face, shout it out loud. Let us see your colors so bright. Come and take the fear of the night. Now shine and give us all a show. Come and melt away all the snow. I know I am shy and it's hard to say goodbye.
But soon the night will come and you will be done
Till the next day, when we will come and play.

Dear, dear sun. Please. please come.
 
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